Fic: Blow-by-blow (4/7)

[anarion]

Have a short intermezzo in the 'Blowjobs for science' series.


Title: Intermezzo - Blown off
Words: 575
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: none
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Beta: the wonderful verityburns
Disclaimer: Sadly the characters are not mine and no money is made (that would be sooo cool!).

Summary: 'Blow-by-blow is the follow-up series for my blowjob 221B which can be found here.



Previous chapter here

Intermezzo - Blown off


“John, can I ask you something?”

John raised his head from the medical article he was reading in the living room. Sherlock had been working on something in the kitchen, but was now walking towards him with a determined look.

“Of course.”

“It has to do with the case. And the... um, lessons.”

John swallowed, but Sherlock had this special face that showed he was puzzled by something. So no immediate need to get excited.

“OK, I’m listening.”

Sherlock sat down on the sofa and looked at him for a few seconds before speaking.

“Why are you doing this? I mean, what is in it for you?”

John was speechless for a moment, his brain shouting ‘Danger! Danger!’

“You said you needed help.”

That sounded lame even to his own ears and Sherlock just looked at him, clearly not believing that this was the only reason. So John decided to add a little honesty.

“First: I’ve always liked to give blow jobs. It’s a very heady feeling to be able to turn someone into a speechless begging mass of want, especially someone as controlled, eloquent and rational as you.

“Second: This is only part in our relationship I have control over, well except from getting you to eat or sleep sometimes and patch you up.

“Third: I know you. You would have gone somewhere else to get your knowledge had I refused. I don’t want you to be used or exploited by anybody.”

“Plus, it arouses you.” It was not a question.

“Yes. You are very handsome and seriously sexy after all.”

Sherlock seemed stunned for a second, then he shook it off.

“But you never ask for anything in return.”

“No, and I never will.”

That was the last thing he wanted. Well, to be honest, it was pretty much all he wanted, but John knew that he would reveal himself the moment Sherlock lay a hand on him, would reveal everything: his desire, his longing, his love.

Even if he could stop himself from babbling while whatever Sherlock had in mind lasted (and he wasn’t sure he could) there was absolutely no way he could stop shouting Sherlock’s name while coming.

Which was what made him sure that this was merely for science on Sherlock’s part. He never said John’s name. He just used his mouth for his education. Oh, he enjoyed it, but there was nothing wrong in combining business with pleasure, was there?

“But what if I wanted to do it?”

Oh God, help me!

“No.”

“John, why are you so difficult? You know that the body is just transport. It doesn’t have to mean anything. But I might learn something from it. And help you to get... relief.”

Sherlock rose to his feet and knelt down in front of him, putting his hands on John’s knees. John tried to move back, but the chair back stopped him.

He grabbed the armrest and tried to get a grip, while his body shouted ‘Yes, oh yes, those hands! Please, oh please, touch me.’

John took a deep breath and turned his arousal into anger.

“I said ‘No’.”

“But...”

John got up, brushing off Sherlock’s hands in the process, and went towards the door.

“No ‘But’, Sherlock. Just no. Never going to happen.”

And he left without turning to look at his flatmate again. As a result, he missed the look of hurt and rejection on Sherlock’s face.


Next chapter here

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AN: Sorry for blue-balling you, the next chapter will follow soon! Sherlock is in for a surprise! :D

Also: Ellie? See the icon? *smoochies*




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Comments

[verityburns.livejournal.com]

OK, I'm going to leave a comment here, but DO NOT REPLY to it... get on with the next chapter instead. Priorities, woman. Seriously.

Lord, I'm still fanning myself after reading this through the other night - how can you make it so hot, when nothing actually happens? Don't answer that. Or rather, answer it with the next chapter.

Please? xxx

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Haha, breath! I am writing at the moment, should be with you in a few hours. :)

[anarion.livejournal.com]

And by 'breath' I meant 'breathe'. Obviously...

[ledasdaughter.livejournal.com]

LOL

oh Verity!

[rox712.livejournal.com]

Now I finally understand what people mean when they say they turn their laptop and shake it to see if there is anything else! Please, please write the next part!! Poor Sherlock, and poor stupid John! ARGH!!

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Hahaha, you are amazing!

This is a perfect comment! *smooches it*

[sabrinaphynn.livejournal.com]

Oh, John.... :(.

Ok, how is this so hot again?
IDK, but please keep writing!
~~~ throws good chocolate to your muse~~~~~
;)

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Chocolate always works!
Muse was happy, chapter is ready. See below for reaction of my beta. *lol*

[ledasdaughter.livejournal.com]

well, that was stupid, John.

more, like, now? yes? please?

[solrosan.livejournal.com]

I just chewed through the cap of my pen....

[anarion.livejournal.com]

That made me laugh for about ten minutes! :D

Thanks for the comment and that image!

[mattsloved1.livejournal.com]

Oh, poor John. Now you simply must quickly update so things can get sorted between the two of them!

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Wow, you just ate through all of the chapters here! :D

Next chapter is already with my beta, so don't lose hope!

[omletlove.livejournal.com]

*whimper* why are they so silly? Please please resolution soon :(

[anarion.livejournal.com]

*pats*

Um, the resolution is still one chapter away, but there will be a blowjob in the next one!

[chocolamousse.livejournal.com]

while his body shouted ‘Yes, oh yes, those hands! Please, oh please, touch me.’
Message to John : FOR GOD'S SAKE YOU UNBELIEVABLY STUPID MAN LISTEN TO YOUR BODY !

the look of hurt and rejection on Sherlock’s face.
Ah. That's good ! For John, I mean. And for us, then.

So, message to you : NEXT CHAPTER ! NEXT CHAPTER !!

[zephyr-macabee.livejournal.com]

Dammit John! Jeezly weezley!

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Haha, don't worry, they will get there. Eventually...

[verityburns.livejournal.com]

OK, readers, brace for impact because I've just read through the next chapter *gloats and shows off shiny Beta badge* and fuck me sideways I can hardly breathe.

Seriously. Sit down before reading. I'm not even fucking kidding... *fans self*

[chocolamousse.livejournal.com]

Oh my God. Two "fuck" in two lines. Is this that bad ? But surely as a Beta you can try to...

No, wait. Two "fuck" in two lines. IS THIS A CLUE ? Did John listen to his body after all ?

*pants with anticipation*

[jerel.livejournal.com]

Can't wait for the next chapter!

I agree with verityburns, that this somehow manages to be hot without them touching each other at all. Amazing.

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Thank you! *bounces*

And look, I have a Doctor icon for your Donna icon! :D

[ellie_hell.livejournal.com]

Sherlock, please stop trying to analyze everything and ask for another blowjob.

John, please stop doing the right thing and let Sherlock give you a blowjob for science.

Sherlock, please touch John and understand that he loves you.

John, tell Sherlock you love him.

Now, kiss.

I love them so much, and I love how they slowly entered that extremely complicated situation. I can't wait to see how it will get resolved. This was a nice moment between them, and as much as I enjoy John giving Sherlock mind-blowing blowjobs, it's pretty hard for him to talk with his mouth full, so it was nice to hear what he had to say. So noble, so determined to do the right thing... aaaawww John, come here, let me hug you.

[anarion.livejournal.com]

John, come here, let me hug you.
I think you might need to stop hugging him and start smacking him. Otherwise he will stay noble and nothing will happen...
Or Sherlock might snap. Let's see. *evil grin*

[ssrobajo.livejournal.com]

Just read the whole series, and oh. my. god. Please update this immediately, if at all possible. I'm dying for more!

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Haha, thanks for the shiny comment!

Please don't die, next chapter is up! :)

[mildly-neurotic.livejournal.com]

Awwww poor Sherlock.

[atlinmerrick.livejournal.com]

Oh lord.

Are you doing it? Dear god have you done it? HAVE YOU DONE IT? I am feeling a touch hysterical here and I don't do well with hysterical it makes me hysterical and I wrote random sentences devoid of punctuation and I get loud and dare I say hysterical and—

TRANSMISSION LOST DUE TO LACK OF OXYGEN IN ATLIN'S LUNGS

[atlinmerrick.livejournal.com]

P.S. I just stole my own last comment line for my Tumblr. Because I'm lame like that. *Smooches*

[tsuki-no-hana.livejournal.com]

Oh god, I just read through all of these. At work. What have you done to me?

I am a sucker for our boys when the are both stupid and clueless and horny and ARGH WHY CAN'T YOU BOTH JUST SEE YOU ARE STUPID PERFECT FOR EACH OTHER STOP COMING UP WITH EXCUSES AND JUST GET IT ON ARGH.

*coughs*

Pardon me. I seem to have misplaced my sense of decorum. I eagerly anticipate the resolution of this series. *nods pompously*

[anarion.livejournal.com]

This comment is made of so much win, I can't even begin to tell you! :D

I just read through all of these. At work.
Only fitting, since I tend to write them at work. *lol*

You might have to wait a little for the resolution, but the next chapter is up now! :)

wonderful

[mirith.livejournal.com]

Oh, my God. This is so hot. How loveable is John here? I just want to marry him. (Aren't I allowed one real husband and one fictional husband under the law?)

This is my favorite paragraph:

"That was the last thing he wanted. Well, to be honest, it was pretty much all he wanted, but John knew that he would reveal himself the moment Sherlock lay a hand on him, would reveal everything: his desire, his longing, his love." Oh, sweet mother of pearl.

Also, extra points for the charming title. Can't wait to read what's next.

Re: wonderful

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Aren't I allowed one real husband and one fictional husband under the law?
This has to be real!

Also: yay, extra points! :D Thank you!

[laurtew.livejournal.com]

Okay, found it! (I did the obvious and used the tags. Silly me.)

Now, I have to add my voice to the rest. I can't wait to see what happens!

Waiting impatiently for the next part!

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Hehe, lucky you! No need to wait, next chapter is up! :)

[zevbaldwin.livejournal.com]

Perfect angst!