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anarion ([personal profile] anarion) wrote2013-03-28 09:01 am

Fic: 221B - A chocolate box place



Title: A chocolate box place
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: Pg-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by [livejournal.com profile] atlinmerrick. Day 272.




Previous 221b: The lovers' dance (2/3)


Today's prompt: chocolate

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A chocolate box place


John stared at the bare-chested and sweaty man standing in the middle of his living room between a huge stack of cardboard boxes. Sherlock seemed unperturbed and ignored the man completely.

"Ah, John. Excellent timing, Lestrade’s coming over."

"Not while there is a half-naked man parading through our living room unexplained. What's with all the boxes?"

Before Sherlock could answer someone could be heard coming up the stairs two steps at a time; John presumed it was Lestrade, in a hurry like always. He was right. Lestrade was about to storm into the room but came to an abrupt stop in the doorway.

"Good Lord."

He stared at the seminude man/cardboard box landscape with wide eyes. John debated with himself on whether he should start to laugh or bang his head against the nearest vertical surface, decided against both and went into the kitchen to make tea.

"Would someone please explain to me what the hell is going on here?"

Sherlock flopped down on the sofa.

"I saved the fortune of one of the Cadbury heirs. He offered to send some chocolate in addition to the payment. John said it would be a nice gesture."

John poked his head back into the room.

"So this is my fault? How was I supposed to know that he would send fifty boxes?"



Next 221b: Against all odds


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AN:
The prompt was 'chocolate'.

I'm off to my folks over Easter, next 221B will be posted on Wednesday, 3rd of April.
Happy Easter egg hunting ot whatever you all are up to over the long weekend! <3






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[identity profile] atlinmerrick.livejournal.com 2013-03-28 08:22 am (UTC)(link)
I love, love, love, love how this was so much less about the chocolate than about the semi-nude man who was completely captivating the attention of just about everyone—including your reader.

What a perfect going-into-Easter story! Have fun during your own Easter!

[identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com 2013-04-03 06:13 pm (UTC)(link)
I can't believe I'm saying this but apparently chocolate isn't everything. ;)

[identity profile] chocolamousse.livejournal.com 2013-03-28 04:42 pm (UTC)(link)
What a delicious prompt.

John stared at the bare-chested and sweaty man standing in the middle of his living room between a huge stack of cardboard boxes.
Is it a remake of The Adventure of the Cardboard Box?

John debated with himself on whether he should start to laugh or bang his head against the nearest vertical surface, decided against both and went into the kitchen to make tea.
Because tea is the answer to everything. It's like 42 but you can drink it.

He offered to send some chocolate in addition to the payment.
If I were Sherlock I'd have asked for the whole payment in chocolate.

"So this is my fault? How was I supposed to know that he would send fifty boxes?"
And they're complaining about that? Well, I'm ready to give a hand (or a mouth) if need be.

Have a lovely time with your family, enjoy your chocolate eggs, and Frohe Ostern! (I hope I just haven't horribly insulted you in German! :D)

[identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com 2013-04-03 06:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Frohe Ostern!

How can you say things like that to me? *is shocked*

Haha, no, that was perfect! If I wrecked my brain I could probably come up with the right words in French. *ahem*

Edit because I can't type.
Edited 2013-04-03 18:15 (UTC)

[identity profile] veniachan.livejournal.com 2013-03-28 08:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Hmm, it was delicious!!!

Does this give it away, how much of a Lestrade fan I am, that my fav part is:
"Lestrade was about to storm into the room but came to an abrupt stop in the doorway."
Cause the image of him runnin up the stairs and then staying there... don't ask, I just love him ^.^

Cadbury is nice, very nice! But with fifty boxes, I think, some charitable giving is in the wind. The three of them could go to a school or an orphanage. It'd be cute :D

Have a nice holiday and Boldog Húsvétot, just because ;)

[identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com 2013-04-03 06:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Belated Kellemes Húsvéti ünnepeket! :)

What do you eat for Easter? I'm curious if the things my family eats are something traditional.

[identity profile] veniachan.livejournal.com 2013-04-03 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
:D

We eat eggs, ham and horseradish. What did you eat?

[identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com 2013-04-03 09:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Eggs, ham and kolbasz, all cooked together. With horseradish and homemade kalács. :)

[identity profile] veniachan.livejournal.com 2013-04-04 10:43 am (UTC)(link)
Hmm, perfect! And oh so delicious! Homemade kalács is the best :D
My mother baked a beautiful cake with poppy seed (it wasn't traditional, she found the recipe on the internet).

[identity profile] rox712.livejournal.com 2013-03-29 07:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Yummy!

[identity profile] treelight.livejournal.com 2013-04-02 05:28 pm (UTC)(link)
50 boxes of Cadbury in 221Bs living room. It must smell as lovely as in a Cadbury Factory in there now!
I just wonder why the box-guy is half-naked ... and if he looked like he should be ;)

[identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com 2013-04-03 06:18 pm (UTC)(link)
I just wonder why the box-guy is half-naked ...
Why not? ;)
The wonders of fiction. All men are pretty and half-naked. *haha*