Fic: 221B - Come, rain or shine (1/2)

[anarion]

Title: Come, rain or shine (1/2)
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: Pg-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick. Day 237.




Previous 221b: Tell me true (4/?)


Today's prompt: rain

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Come, rain or shine (1/2)


John stepped through the door into the hot August air. It was 2 in the morning and the recent heat wave left him restless at night.

He looked over the peaceful scenery in front of him and couldn’t believe that they were actually on a holiday in Languedoc. Even Sherlock seemed content without a case, he had buried himself in the history of Montségur and actually seemed to enjoy the country and the food.

There was a distant rumbling and two minutes later huge drops of rain started to fall. John raised his face towards the sky, enjoying the refreshing coolness and almost jumped when the heat of Sherlock’s naked body pressed against his back.

Sherlock’s hands gently stroked his chest and he started kissing and licking John’s neck before he let his hands fall to John’s groin. John tried to bite back a moan but then he realised that with the rain bucketing down nobody could hear him anyway.

He felt Sherlock grow hard against his backside and he rolled his hips, pressing his erection in Sherlock’s hands and then his buttocks against his cock.

They found an easy rhythm sliding against each other and the rain swallowed their moans.

John leaned into Sherlock and for the first time thought that it would be nice if their flat had a balcony.


Part 2




Next 221b: I spy with my little eye


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AN:
The prompt was 'rain'.
I do love rain!

Something for the ambience: rain

Languedoc is a part of France and Montségur is famous for being one of the last strongholds of the Cathars.









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Comments

[atlinmerrick.livejournal.com]

Well hot damn. (Do you see what I did there? Hot? Hot?)

The glorious problem with these 221Bs is you do them so well that we see a full picture...and then want the full story. *sigh*

Deliciously done, as always.

[kestrel337.livejournal.com]

Oh dear Goddess...

Mountains. Deep Summer Heat. Thunderstorm. Balcony Sex.

MMMMMMM HMMMMM.

[chocolamousse.livejournal.com]

*looks at the title*
Oh, aren't you ashamed? No, don't reply, I already know the answer. :D

He looked over the peaceful scenery in front of him and couldn’t believe that they were actually on a holiday in the Languedoc.
I LIVE IN LANGUEDOC! Why the hell did I never come across Sherlock and John doing saucy things in the rain?

John raised his face towards the sky, enjoying the refreshing coolness and almost jumped when the heat of Sherlock’s naked body pressed against his back.
Wait, let me, er, savour this image.
*savours the image a lot*
*savours all the following images actually*

it would be nice if their flat had a balcony.
Yes, especially for the neighbours opposite.

Well that was sexy. I mean, I can imagine Sherlock's and John's perspiring naked bodies in the hot air of the night, and then the rain, and... and... *gulps* Somebody give me a fan please. I re-read the fic with the sound from the link and it was even better. Like you I love rain, especially the sound of it. (Maybe you could put the link before the fic so that your readers can enjoy the sound from the first reading? I'm not saying that re-reading it was a chore, oh no! :D)

P.S. Yesterday you posted a fic about religion. Yesterday the pope resigned. Anarion, what have you done? :D

Pst! "They found an easy rhythm". Also, it's "Languedoc" and "Montségur", without "the". Sorry about your word count! :D

[anarion.livejournal.com]

You live in Languedoc? How cool is that? When can I come visit? :D

Damn my word count! Um, I meant 'thank you'.:)

[rox712.livejournal.com]

I'm all for a Sherlock meet-up in Languedoc!

[auntiesuze.livejournal.com]

I love how utterly sensual this is. And that title. XD

[rox712.livejournal.com]

Perfect! A heat wave, summer rain and hot sex on a balcony *sigh* Way to take my mind from winter freezing cold and sick kids. Thanks.

[treelight.livejournal.com]

Oh my, wouldn't that be a show ... the two boys, like this, at 2am in the morning, during a hot summer night, on a balcony - facing towards Baker Street ...

[verityburns.livejournal.com]

Oh, my word! *fans self*

That must be the hottest downpour ever - thank you for that!

Can you imagine the congestion of traffic (and by 'traffic' I mean 'fangirls') if 221B DID have a balcony? *fans self again. Harder*

xxx

[veniachan.livejournal.com]

It's a blessing to have a balcony on hot summer nights! And if you add rain, John, Sherlock and sex to it :>:>:> They should build one really (and I want to rent the flat next to their- I want it without a balcony as well, but that way'd be so much better ;))

thx for the link, it's just great!

[purrculier1.livejournal.com]

Thank You for the sound affects (not the ones I made while reading this, those were embarrasing*blush*)I love the sound of rain.

This was sweet,(vacation and Sherlock content even without cases awwww)
brain-melty,(I wish there was a balcony at Baker st. and I was within peeping-tom peeking distance too.)and educational Languedoc is a part of France and Montségur is famous for being one of the last strongholds of the Cathars. I did not know that, I'll reread this again just *cough* for that informational tid-bit.*cough*

[random-nexus.livejournal.com]

Unf. Oh, yes, I love the rain fics and the rubbing fics and here you have rain and rubbing and... okay, yes, babbling now.

Yay.