Fic: 221B - Too much
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anarionTitle: Too much
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: NC-17
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by
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atlinmerrick. Day 228.Previous 221b: Inexperienced
Today's prompt: moaning
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Too much
He was going to die while being masterfully deep throated by Sherlock Holmes. On a Wednesday. What a way to go.
“Oh God, stop. Sher... stop!”
Sherlock stopped. He raised his head and his face showed insecurity and rejection before he was able to rearrange it into his usual expression of detached nonchalance.
“Not good?”
“Too good.” John was still busy trying to get his breath back but he moved his hand from Sherlock’s hair to his lips and gently ran his thumb over them.
“I... fuck. I’m so turned on, I can’t come. I think my heart might explode before my balls though.”
Sherlock looked at him for a few seconds, then he nodded once and crawled into John’s lap.
“Do me,” he whispered and leaned down to kiss John.
John wrapped his fingers around his lover’s cock and watched him arch into the touch. Sherlock was always beautiful, but lost in a haze of lust he was radiant. It didn’t take long for Sherlock to shake apart in John’s arms and after that Sherlock barely had to touch him and he followed with a strangled shout.
“I take it you don’t want to do this again?”
“Are you crazy? Of course I do. Even if it kills me.”
Sherlock chuckled, “That would certainly count as ‘going out with a bang’.”
Next 221b: Iron out the kinks
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AN:
The prompt was 'moaning'.
Atlin also said (on a different occasion): "Here's an odd one (porn? not porn?) one of 'em can't come. Drunk? A little bit of erectile dysfunction? What do they do/say/think?"
I decided to mix the two.
Prequel to Deep Throat.
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Date: 2013-01-28 07:38 pm (UTC)Excuse me, I have to read this again.
Now.
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Date: 2013-01-28 10:52 pm (UTC)And I'm glad you like the icon, twas made by the fabulous
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Date: 2013-01-29 06:29 pm (UTC)THE KIZZIA that wrote 'Miracle on Baker Street'? I love that story. Oh yes, I do.(let me throw rose petals at you *toss*. Who just casually mentioned John and Sherlock, 'They merged',and a regimental tie involved? *can't breath* *flails* *runs to set alert*
O.K. done now. (Sorry)
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Date: 2013-01-29 07:50 pm (UTC)Oh my god, that is just the loveliest thing to say *throws more rose petals back* I'm so glad you liked the story and I'm wondering how we are not yet friends on here *goes and clicks a few buttons and comes back* so I've fixed that now :)
You may have to wait a bit for the "merging" as I can't decide whether it's going to go in my - currently being finished and edited - NaNoWriMo2012 post reichenbach fic or if it will fit somewhere in the drabble series I'm also working on.
Thank you again. Really, thank you so much as I had some not very good news earlier and this made me feel better.
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Date: 2013-01-29 09:15 pm (UTC)Glad I gave you a happy though, and I don't think I commented on the story when I read it(December was sort of a lost month for me*sighs*)Imma gonna fix that soon. *pinky promise*
Noah's red rubber rain boots! You friended me, sorry I can't do it back. LJ is a bas...(sorry) is slightly unreasonable about paid accounts only being able to friend and I don't have one as I'm
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Date: 2013-01-31 09:43 am (UTC)How?
Date: 2013-01-28 08:05 pm (UTC)And then you couple it with such a wonderful icon?!
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Date: 2013-01-28 09:43 pm (UTC)(I think you mean he's radiant, rather than radiating, which I only picked up on after reading this...I lost track how many times)
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Date: 2013-01-31 09:44 am (UTC)Damn, now I want marshmallows!
(yes, I probably do. Thanks! )
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Date: 2013-01-29 05:33 pm (UTC)*Walks
runscalmly to freezer for ice-tray**
RUNSwalks calmly back to 'puter**Continues to read*
*Thinks the floor looks good for a lie-down*
*Lies down*
*Waves Thank You from Floor and will send *Hugs* when feeling returns to limbs*
Fun Fact: Wednesday is sometimes called Hump-day here in the USA. just
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Date: 2013-01-31 09:45 am (UTC)