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Title: Bring me down
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by [livejournal.com profile] atlinmerrick. Day 217.




Previous 221b: The return


Today's prompt: scarf

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Bring me down

Most of the time there is awe and love and worship when they come together in bed, but most importantly there’s something that sets them apart from so many other couples: there is joy and laughter. Yes, one time they were both laughing so hard (so to speak) that they kind of forgot to come in the end.

Sometimes, though, their sex is quite different. Sometimes it’s fast, sometimes rough and on rare occasions something akin to a fight. Like yesterday, when Sherlock was so keyed up that he kept jumping up and walking around the living room like a tiger in a cage despite being completely exhausted.

“Sherlock, stop running around. Seriously, I will wrestle you to the ground with your scarf and sit on you if you don’t.”

Sherlock’s head shot up. “Would you now?”

Sometimes he couldn’t calm down on his own, it was like being on a loop that he couldn’t escape. In cases like that he needed to fight John, needed to be fought by John to break out of it.

John hadn’t thought about sex a second ago, but was already heading towards a fabulous erection by the time he reached Sherlock.

You might call it ironic that Sherlock’s inability to give in despite being weary to the bone was solved by, err, a boner.



Next 221b: Deep Throat


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AN:
The prompt - courtesy of Verity Burns - was 'scarf'.

Sometimes I really hate being restricted by 221 words. That would have been a glorious sex scene! ;)

EDIT: Now with the missing sex scene here!











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Date: 2013-01-11 05:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] atlinmerrick.livejournal.com
Oh...so in character, the loop Sherlock can get stuck on.

"John hadn’t thought about sex a second ago, but was already heading towards a fabulous erection by the time he reached Sherlock."

And here I thought this would be the gigglesome best line of the entire 221B but I was wrong because...

"You might call it ironic that Sherlock’s inability to give in despite being weary to the bone was solved by, err, a boner."

I am going to kiss you on the mouth now. Stand still.

Date: 2013-01-11 07:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crazycatt71.livejournal.com
You could write the glorious sex scene as a one shot. Pretty please.
*batts eyes and looks cute*

Date: 2013-01-11 08:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kestrel337.livejournal.com
Sooo...couldn't this 221B just sort of be the appetizer? For a one off main course? Well, OK, technically a two off. But I don't remember anything in the rules that says you can't let the story, you know...grow. Expand. Extend...*thinking*...*thinking*...

Nope, that's all I've got.

Date: 2013-01-11 08:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arianedevere.livejournal.com
Yep. What they said. Write the damned fic already!!!

Date: 2013-01-11 09:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rox712.livejournal.com
Wait, wasn't there something like a monthly longer story in the rules? There! Problem solved!

Because the tention you build up here needs to go somewhere...

Date: 2013-01-13 06:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tamzette.livejournal.com
Exactly what I was going to say!!!

Date: 2013-01-12 10:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] titc.livejournal.com
Oh, I love all those snippets of life you give us, this peek into their selves and relationship. Sherlock in a loop and John sex-wrestling him out of it is just perfect!

Date: 2013-01-13 01:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chocolamousse.livejournal.com
THE SEQUEL! THE SEQUEL!! THE SEQUEL!!!

And that's all I have to say. :D

Date: 2013-01-13 02:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] purrculier1.livejournal.com
'Sometimes I really hate being restricted by 221 words. That would have been a glorious sex scene! ;)'
*Rolls Eyes* Yes, so tragic that all we get is this beautiful, AWWWW causing little look into the Baker Boys private moments.*Rolls Eyes again*

"You might call it ironic that Sherlock’s inability to give in despite being weary to the bone was solved by, err, a boner."
*Guffaws loudly at that line* Elegant(well let's call it elegant, sounds better than brain-stutter inducing.:D)bit of word play with that line.
*Cheers* at clever Anarion for that line.

But this line "Yes, one time they were both laughing so hard (so to speak) that they kind of forgot to come in the end." made me hug my monitor because I couldn't hug you for writing it. That is joyous and happy thought that they can have that kind of Playfulness, just bring such light and ease into both their hearts and souls.*Sighs*
Enchanting, Thank You!
Joining the chorus, write it, write it, write it. 'Cause of course it would be glorious. Amen and Hallelujah.

Date: 2013-01-14 10:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verityburns.livejournal.com
Woah! Oh, yeah, baby... this is the good stuff right here :D

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