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Title: Unsung Hero
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by [livejournal.com profile] atlinmerrick.






Previous 221b: Black and white



Today's prompt: whisper

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Unsung Hero


They all knew the tall one with the curly hair. He was weird and his words were harsh, but he was fair and true to his words and he never looked down on them. Some knew his name, some didn’t.

They had known him for years, a solitary figure walking the streets of London, when he suddenly turned up with a companion by his side. At first they didn’t take notice, but after a while they came to respect the new one too.

When he started walking the streets without the tall one, he was insecure at first, lost in their world. They ignored him. But when he started to learn how to listen, how to see, he started making contacts of his own, and when he needed help, they came. Because while they respected the tall one, the short one they liked.

And after walking the streets for months, mostly with the tall one, sometimes alone, they all knew him, the quiet, plain man, who helped when help was needed, without much ado and without a lot of words. His gaze could be cold, hard and intimidating but his smile was warm and his hands comforting.

They called him ‘the kind doctor’.

Unbeknownst to everyone, even to John and Sherlock, in the streets of London a second legend was born.





Next 221b: Show your hand


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AN:
The prompt was 'whisper'.

This is my last post in this verse before I'll disappear into the Christmas madness with my family. [Of course there's the Christmas climax for our poor tortured boys tomorrow in the Advent verse!]
'365 Days' will probably return on the 27th or 28th. :D

Happy Holidays to you, dear readers! Thanks for staying with me, for reading, for cheering me on, for commenting, for laughing, for crying, for feeling touched, for being inspired and inspiring. I love you all! <3








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Date: 2012-12-23 09:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] atlinmerrick.livejournal.com
All of this is beautiful...that final line raised goosebumps all over me.

Anarion, this is stunning.
Edited Date: 2012-12-23 09:04 pm (UTC)

Date: 2012-12-23 09:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chocolamousse.livejournal.com
OH MY GOD YOUR NEW ICON. (Sorry Anarion but DID YOU SEE THAT ICON?)
*drools*
Every time I see your old one I feel like answering, "I wouldn't say 'No'." :D

Date: 2012-12-23 09:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] atlinmerrick.livejournal.com
I said to Verity, "I bet Chocolamousse is the first one to notice my new icon."

Chocolamousse? You are the first one to notice.

Also, Verity looked at that photo on Rox712's Tumblr and said, "You know, this would be a great photo if you ever want to update your avatar."

Apparently I wanted to update my avatar because 5 minutes later I had, um, updated my avatar. Isn't he a pretty, pretty, pretty boy? (Rhetorical question, though it may be lyrically answered if you so desire.)

Also, here is a gay pony. With peas. For noticing first. *Hands you a gay pony. With peas.*
Edited Date: 2012-12-23 09:37 pm (UTC)

Date: 2012-12-23 09:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verityburns.livejournal.com
Where is MY gay pony?!

*stomps off to the freezer to help herself to some peas*

There's no justice!

Date: 2012-12-23 09:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] atlinmerrick.livejournal.com
I bring you sugar-free skinny vanilla lattes, apples sliced by hand, satsumas, and lime pickle. If you would rather have a gay pony with peas I can completely stop providing all of the previous. It is, madam, your choice.

Atlin looks west.

Date: 2012-12-23 10:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chocolamousse.livejournal.com
It's all right Verity, I've just asked Atlin a second pony so I think I can lend you one sometimes if you want. Although maybe it would be cruel to separate them so I'll lend you both. Also if she gives you one eventually you could call him Lestrade. :D

Date: 2012-12-23 09:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chocolamousse.livejournal.com
Well, you didn't choose the kind of image which can be unnoticed. Thanks for the peas. Be sure I'll make good use of them. Thanks for the gay poney too but I'm afraid he'll feel a bit lonely. Could you please send me a second one? I'll call them Sherlock and John, I'll cuddle them and I'll learn them to look West and it will be a very merry Christmas.

Also, I'm sorry but I'm unable to lyrically answered your question. There would be too much to say. Sometimes all you can do is contemplating and rejoicing in your heart of hearts. :D

Date: 2012-12-29 11:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] atlinmerrick.livejournal.com
A side note: Rox712 above now has a gay pony as well. I believe these ponies should, uh, get to know one another.

Just saying...

Date: 2012-12-24 11:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rox712.livejournal.com
Oh, so that's why I had an "atlinmerrick likes your photo" on my dash! It was Veritys fault! I should have known.

and does that mean that I get a gay pony too? What the hell would i do with one of those? *sigh*
Edited Date: 2012-12-24 11:29 pm (UTC)

Date: 2012-12-29 10:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] atlinmerrick.livejournal.com
All I can say is Chocolamousse has a gay pony and now you do, too. All I can *also* say is...nudge, nudge, wink, wink introduce them already!

Date: 2012-12-29 01:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rox712.livejournal.com
Porn between porn ponys! Atlin your imagination is running away with you!

Date: 2012-12-29 02:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] atlinmerrick.livejournal.com
Then for god's sake please don't touch it! Let it run. Let it ruuuuun.

Date: 2012-12-23 09:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verityburns.livejournal.com
Lord, that's good! It's goosebump city over here from that last line - what a fantastic note on which to break for Christmas. Love it!

Date: 2012-12-23 09:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chocolamousse.livejournal.com
When he started walking the streets without the tall one
What do you mean, without the tall one? You can't go all Reichenbachy now, it's Christmas!

And after walking the streets for months, mostly with the tall one, sometimes alone
Aaaaah. I feel better. :D

It's a lovely and quiet story, like John. He has not Sherlock's flamboyance but there's so much to praise and love in him.

Thanks for staying with me, for reading, for cheering me on, for commenting
Yes, you can thank us, it's such a chore. Especially the commenting thing. *sighs* Happy holiday season to you too, and thank you for all these terrific fics! :-)

Pst! "They called him ‘the kind doctor’". :-)

Date: 2012-12-23 10:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fanbot.livejournal.com
This little story is a shiny gem. I love it.

Date: 2012-12-23 10:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kestrel337.livejournal.com
Head cannon accepted. I've always thought John would find meaning through the network post-fall. I may (or may not) be working on something along those lines, said the timid writer.

Happy Christmas!

Date: 2012-12-23 11:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kizzia.livejournal.com
We love you too! This was gorgeous - I think it completely encapsulates John.
Hope you have a lovely Christmas!

Date: 2012-12-24 09:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] treelight.livejournal.com
What a wonderful little story to send us off into the holidays. It even almost sounds like a Christmas tale.

Thank you for what you shared with us so far. I wish you a happy time with good food and nice presents. Merry Christmas!

Date: 2012-12-24 10:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tracionn.livejournal.com
God that's amazing! What a great atmosphere, and what a great idea. This sent a shiver to my spine and at the same time a smile to my lips.
FAVE!

Date: 2012-12-24 01:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aranel-parmadil.livejournal.com
This lovely. I think I can honestly say that this is my favourite so far of all your 221B fics. That last line? Perfection.

Date: 2012-12-24 11:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rox712.livejournal.com
Sad and beautiful. Goosebumps all over the comments!

Happy Holidays to you too my lovely! It has been a year filled with your stories and the luck of meeting you. What's not to love?

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