Fic: 221B - Intermezzo
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anarionTitle: Intermezzo
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by
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atlinmerrick.Previous 221b: Test run
Today's prompt: finger
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Intermezzo
John’s ecstatic final moan was lost in the loud music. His knees almost gave in and it took him a few moments to come back from the high as he tried to get some air into his lungs and at the same time muster enough motion control to turn off the radio.
His orgasm did nothing to lessen the intensity of his need though, it only cleared his head a little. He reached for Sherlock, who had taken a step back to examine John, and with one movement he ripped his shirt open, spilling buttons through the kitchen. Most of them settled quite decoratively between the ruins of the experiment.
“What do you want?”
Sherlock raised his hand and trailed John’s lips with his index finger.
“Would you... with your mouth?”
John smiled in response and sucked Sherlock’s finger into his mouth. Sherlock groaned and pressed his body against John’s.
John walked Sherlock into the bedroom where he stripped him naked in seconds and pushed him down onto the bed.
He took a moment to appreciate the sight before him, then he crawled up to push his tongue into Sherlock’s mouth.
He remembered his own urgency in the kitchen and thought that it was time to stop the teasing. He slid down and opened his mouth, his left hand cupping Sherlock’s balls.
Next 221b: Blinded by love
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AN:
Today's prompt was 'finger'.
This is a sequel to I won't come quietly. I am tempted to call the next part 'Me neither'. *snorts*
Holy crap, am I craving chocolate right now. #TMI
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Date: 2012-10-17 06:44 pm (UTC)I am sorry for the sweary, but it's warranted when one reads a story that starts with a man in the act of coming. All right? All right.
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Date: 2012-10-17 07:24 pm (UTC)Always the scientist. :D
He took a moment to appreciate the sight before him
Who wouldn't?
then he crawled up to push his tongue into Sherlock’s mouth.
Who wouldn't?He slid down and opened his mouth, his left hand cupping Sherlock’s balls.
Oh my God the cliffhanger! The sequel, quick! Here, have chocolate if it can make you write faster! :D
Maybe you could add a link to their respective next parts in Desires are nourished by delays and in I won't come quietly, for your future readers! :-)
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Date: 2012-10-17 08:01 pm (UTC)Gorgeous!
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Date: 2012-10-17 11:41 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-10-18 12:10 am (UTC)That's what I love about your writing, you just drop a little giggle moment in the middle of the brain melt.
let's my brain come back on line enough to grab the ice cubes.
I'll stuff you full of home-made chocolate truffles if you do call the next part don't know how, but I'd try like a collie hearding ducklings.(yup)
and about that cliffhanger ending, Anarion is EVIL.(yay!)
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Date: 2012-10-18 11:34 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-10-18 12:00 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-10-18 06:18 pm (UTC)That is all.
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Date: 2012-10-19 06:03 pm (UTC)Thank you for taking the time to leave me a comment!
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