Fic: 221B - Take me to the edge

[anarion]

Title: Take me to the edge
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick.






Previous 221b: Taken (4/6)


Today's prompt: lubricant

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Take me to the edge


He is floating, high on arousal, his body left behind on the sofa, back arched, Sherlock’s lips moving against his skin.

He feels his orgasm building, taking him even higher, digs his heels and fingers into the leather and then... then Sherlock stops. Again.

John is falling back into his own body and he makes a slightly tortured sound, the sharp edge of yes, almost, God so close already fading.

John has no idea for how long this has been going on, or how often Sherlock has brought him to the edge already.

Each time after Sherlock had stopped pleasuring John he shoved a hand down his own pants and stroked himself. And each time he made himself stop just before.

Just like now. His face bears an almost painful expression and John finds himself whispering, “No, don’t stop.”

Relief crosses Sherlock’s face and he pushes his hand back, strokes himself hard and quick until he comes with an open-mouthed moan.

Then he wraps his hand around the base of John’s cock, his strokes made slick by his own come, and sucks the head into his mouth. John slams his head against the armrest and his orgasm hits him so hard, it is almost painful.

After John’s shout has faded, all that’s left in the air is two men’s harsh breathing.








Next 221b: 221b or not to be


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AN:
Today's prompt was 'lubricant'.

Have some porn after all the angst! :D
And I have a new tag! *yay*






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Comments

[bradspyjamas.livejournal.com]

*swoons happily and keeps re-reading*
Bloody wonderful, thank you :)

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Tee-hee, thank you! :D

[chocolamousse.livejournal.com]

Hot 221B is hot.

his body left behind on the sofa
Listen, if John doesn't need his body for a while, do you think he'd agree to lend it to me? I promise I, er, I'll take great care of it.

And I have a new tag! *yay*
Oh, you mean the "anarion can be nice too" thing? This is not a tag, Anarion, this is autosuggestion. Because if you were nice you'd give us the end of Taken AND porn. What do you mean, "a tiny bit demanding"?

I think it's "Each time after Sherlock has stopped pleasuring John he shoves a hand down his own pants and strokes himself. And each time he makes himself stop just before", or "Each time after Sherlock had stopped pleasuring John he had shoved a hand down his own pants and had stroked himself. And each time he had made himself stop just before". :-)

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Listen, if John doesn't need his body for a while, do you think he'd agree to lend it to me?
What are you, a body snatcher?

Hm, that reminds me. When is the next part of 'Taken' due? *evil grin*

[rox712.livejournal.com]

asdfdkrghckrhgkh.............. *thud*

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Oops. :D

[kestrel337.livejournal.com]

Hubster: Honey, what was that thud? Why are you lying...did you fall off the chair?

Me: huuuuuuhhhh

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Hahaha! :D

[auntiesuze.livejournal.com]

GUH.

I was trying to figure out how this connected to the last chapter of Taken and was wondering if I'd missed a part or something. Then I double-checked the title and realized this was totally separate. Duh. Yeah. The porn. I'm blaming it on the mind-blowing porn. *nods*

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Tee-hee. Brain melted. Go me! ;)

[random-nexus.livejournal.com]

OMFG! YES! This tiny amount of words is packed with so much HOTNESS! Gawdz, you rock!

\o/

[anarion.livejournal.com]

I love that you are always here for the smutty 221Bs! :D

Thank you! <3

[random-nexus.livejournal.com]

YES! I'M TOTALLY HERE FOR YOU, M'FRIEND!
You do the smutty so well, after all!

(I won't pretend a certain ficcish wench isn't tipping us off now and then to your particularly awesome posts. *coughatlincough*)

[tracionn.livejournal.com]

God, my belly just produced a flock of butterflies joined by a swarm of bees. I swear. (Yes, let's say belly....).
This is so exquisite and erotic, so incredibly touching and intense I can't even.
I wish I had better words to express myself but really, after just having read this it's a wonder I still know what a word is!
Hnnnnnggg. Fave of faves.

[anarion.livejournal.com]

This is so exquisite and erotic, so incredibly touching and intense
Wow, thank you! *is touched*

[atlinmerrick.livejournal.com]

How did I not comment on this one when I ran off and sent the URL to a half dozen other people after reading it? (Hi Random!)

This is truly deliciously sexual. Gorgeous. I may or may not have visualized this hours later when I was tired and couldn't sleep.

Also:

"his strokes made slick by his own come"

Oh dear god yes.

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Haha, so this is why Random is always here for the porn! *giggles*

[days-of-storm.livejournal.com]

now I know what you meant when you said you were writing smut XD you're also stealing my ideas haha. or I could just refer to this one instead of writing chapter 6 on the come to bed one. of course with reversed roles and all but...

umm. also: this is very hot XD

[anarion.livejournal.com]

We have a hive mind... ;)

Did you already post chapter 6 and I missed it?

[days-of-storm.livejournal.com]

no, I haven't had time to write anything during the last few days...simply no time and energy

[rakshanda.livejournal.com]

HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT. Love this fic!

I love edging. Everyone should try it. It's RAPTURE.

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Hee, glad to hear you enjoyed reading. Thank you! :)