Fic: 221B - A tongue-in-cheek incident

[anarion]

Title: A tongue-in-cheek incident
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick.






Previous 221b: Easy Rider


Today's prompt: razor/ shave

________________________________________________

A tongue-in-cheek incident


John woke slowly when the mattress next to him sunk in under the weight of another person. He marvelled at the fact that he now was able to wake slowly, not instantly with a racing heart and his flight instinct on high alert. It was one of the many gifts Sherlock had given him.

He had never slept in the same bed with Sarah after he almost broke her nose one night when she snuggled close to him.

But he didn’t want to think about Sarah when he had Sherlock in his bed. Sherlock, who had waited patiently for John to get used to another body sleeping next to him. Sherlock, who had been on a case the last few nights and not in their bed. Sherlock, who was now kissing a wet trail down John’s spine.

John moaned softly when the mouth reached his bum and a perky tongue tried to wiggle between his cheeks. Then he yelped softly.

“You know I hate stubble. You could’ve shaved.”

“I couldn’t wait any longer. I promise I will shave tomorrow morning and then apologise with clean-shaved kisses to every part of irritated skin. Now I want to make you come with my tongue and then I want to sleep. Objections?”

John had none. In the end he didn’t even mind the stubble burn.



Next 221b: Trapped


------------------
AN:
Today's prompt was 'razor/ shave'.










.

Comments

[atlinmerrick.livejournal.com]

"Now I want to make you come with my tongue and then I want to sleep.”

Damn the torpedoes that right there would just about be enough to do the job for me. Just hearing that voice say those words. *Kindly insert noises of a hungry hungry nature right here thanks so much*

[auntiesuze.livejournal.com]

Oh god...the title! LMFAO! Both hot and hilarious...I don't know how you do it! :D

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Yeah, that's a title I'm actually quite proud of. :D

[chocolamousse.livejournal.com]

Sherlock, who had waited patiently for John to get used to another body sleeping to him.
Tell us more about that time please!

Now I want to make you come with my tongue and then I want to sleep. Objections?
I think Sherlock is not a very demanding man. Denying him what he asks would be cruel. *nods*

Yeah, right, keep on saying you're hopeless with titles, you silly woman! :-)

[chocolamousse.livejournal.com]

Hey, look, I've just came across the perfect illustration for your fic!
http://sc.aithine.org/sherlock/201/10/sherlock-201-09557.jpg
What do you mean, "I'm not talking about his cheek and it's not even the right kind of cheek"? :D

[anarion.livejournal.com]

*snorts*
Have I told you recently that I love you? Because I do! *smooches*

[verityburns.livejournal.com]

OMG, this is the best title ever in the world! Don't let me hear another word from you on the subject of inadequate titling or I shall be compelled to smack you over the head with a print out of my favourite of your 221Bs - and believe me, that's quite a hefty wedge of documentation right there.

"Now I want to make you come with my tongue and then I want to sleep. Objections?”

Really, it would be churlish to object to such an offer, surely? You go for it, Sherlock, darling. We're with you all the way!

ALL the way :D

[sabrinaphynn.livejournal.com]

And somehow I am affixed to the inherent sweetness of Sherlock patently taking his time to get John used to sharing the bed with him. Because only John is that important enough to quell the impatience personified that is Sherlock.

[purrculier1.livejournal.com]

*checks that is signed in, whew.)

'John woke slowly when the mattress next to him sunk in under the weight of another person.'
'It was one of the many gifts Sherlock had given him.'
'Sherlock who had been on a case the last few nights and not in their bed.'

These three lines, and all the words between them, gives me very complicated emotions. About trust, love, patience, knowing what's worth waiting for, and recognition(from both views)of those things as being the gift that they are.

Then you used the prompt so very well, my yes, but I think it will be appreciated more on rereading. Can't shake the bittersweet of the first part, and your porn should always be given *full* attention.

This was beautiful and hot, and your title was perfect.(tsk, why you always say you can't title?)

[rox712.livejournal.com]

sophisticated title is sophisticated ROFLMAO!!

Two stories in one 221b! Love and porn. You're spoiling us again.

[tracionn.livejournal.com]

Aw, this again is such a perfection in terms of balance between deeply moving and highly amusing. So wonderfully well done! For sure a fave. Yes!!

Also, your twists? Wel played - I thoughht for a minute Sherlock was making the shaving remark to John ;)

And only after reading the other comments I realised the title - ha! hahaha! Tongue in cheek. Brilliant!

[arianedevere.livejournal.com]

Oh my word. Love, devotion, hot sex, Dat Voice and hilarity. This is about as perfect as perfection can be. *swoons*