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Title: Forever
Words: 221
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by [livejournal.com profile] atlinmerrick.





Previous 221b: As Long as Necessary


Today's prompt: grave

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Forever


He knew instantly what the inscription was going to say: Now. Always.


John takes his eyes of the window display and walks into the jeweller’s shop.


He doesn’t need the ring. He is sure of his love for Sherlock and of Sherlock’s love for him. He doesn’t need to mark Sherlock (except for the marks that no one will see) but he knows that Sherlock is possessive and sometimes insecure and will therefore want to have ‘his’ ring on John’s finger for everyone to see.

And he will need a ring on his finger for himself to see. That John loves him and will always love him.



The jeweller, a tiny, bald old man, asks him what kind of woman his fiancée is. John explains and ignores the old man’s responding raised eyebrow he gets.


Of course it’s not going to be a real wedding. It’s not legal in the UK after all.

But the ceremony, the saying it in front of a registrar, is not the important part of this.
It’s the gesture of telling Sherlock that he wants to be with him now and forever. He is not going to leave ever again.



John smiles and pockets the slim white gold rings.


Because though Sherlock thinks he sees and knows everything in this regard he is strangely blind.





Next 221b: It's lonely at the top


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AN:
Today's prompt was 'grave'.

AN: ‘grave’ is an archaic form of ‘engrave’. I chose to read the prompt that way because everything else would have been dark and sad. And I needed to finish what I started yesterday anyway. :)








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Date: 2012-06-24 07:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arianedevere.livejournal.com
Oh my good lord. *wibbles* This is so lovely, sweetie. And yay for more white gold rings! We are setting a trend. Season 4 of Sherlock - they have to have them. *nods*

And what a gorgeous interpretation of Atlin's prompt. *hugs you*

Date: 2012-06-27 08:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
Season 4 of Sherlock - they have to have them. *nods*
Oh God, yes!

I love white gold and I think it suits them more than gold rings would.

Thank you, darling! <3
*hugs back*

Date: 2012-06-24 07:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] atlinmerrick.livejournal.com
I sort of got stuck on the idea of them marking one another. I love that idea, in all the ways it can be meant.

Lovely...

Date: 2012-06-27 08:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
them marking one another. I love that idea, in all the ways it can be meant.
*glances dreamily into the distance*

Maybe this should be a prompt? :D

Date: 2012-06-24 07:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bradspyjamas.livejournal.com
Oh lordy my lip is wibbling. I just ... that was beautiful. I wish I could get the feelings and emotions you do in such a few words. You get All the praise for this.

Date: 2012-06-27 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
Aaww, thank you so much! What a lovely and wonderful comment! :)

<3

Date: 2012-06-24 07:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] antesqueluz.livejournal.com
Perfect. Love that John is his blind spot, and that John understands what Sherlock needs even when the detective doesn't.

Date: 2012-06-27 09:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
John is his blind spot
ooh, I like that! :D

Thank you for the lovely comment! <3

Date: 2012-06-24 08:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rox712.livejournal.com
Of course Sherlock wants everyone to see. Oh my, so sweet. Can't wait to read Sherlocks reaction.

Date: 2012-06-27 08:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
Can't wait to read Sherlocks reaction.
Mh, yes. I should write that at some point, shouldn't I? ;)

Date: 2012-06-24 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sabrinaphynn.livejournal.com
Aww, this reminds me of the inscription on my wedding ring... (Forever and a day)
Lovely!

Date: 2012-06-27 08:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
That's a lovely inscription too! :)

Thanks! <3

Date: 2012-06-24 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] treelight.livejournal.com
I thank you so very much for this special interpretation of the prompt! I certainly prefer something like that over "dark and sad" every day!

Perhaps I shouldn't read the prompts before the story after all ... this one nearly gave me a heart attack.

Date: 2012-06-27 08:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
Sorry for the heart attack! *pats gently*

And you are very welcome. I wasn't in the mood for dark and sad. I rarely am, so there will be much more fluff and fun along the way! :D

Date: 2012-06-25 10:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chocolamousse.livejournal.com
Yesterday for the first time I had not time to read and comment your 221B. I feel bad. :D This fic demonstrates why reading the prompt before the fic can be a very bad idea, because I read grave and thought, "Argh, angst afoot, oh no no no", but the first sentence comforted me straight away.

Now. Always rang a bell and I had the feeling that you used these words before, that somehow they were important in your canon, and I was even certain that I had mentioned them in the "Hey I've read all your fics at last and they're great" PM I send you six months ago. So I had I look at my inbox and look what I found about The Essence of Love in this PM: "I love "Now. Always" too, perfect words to engrave on their rings if someday you write a fic in which they get married !" Great minds think alike! :D I still think they're perfect.

As is the whole fic. So sweet and tender and moving and romantic and just awww. I'd very much like to see Sherlock's reaction now!

Date: 2012-06-27 09:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
"I love "Now. Always" too, perfect words to engrave on their rings if someday you write a fic in which they get married !"
See? I listen to you! :D

I'd very much like to see Sherlock's reaction now!
Yeah, I just realised that I should write that some time. ;)

Date: 2012-06-25 06:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mirith.livejournal.com
Lovely. Extra points for you for teaching me vocabulary.

"Of course it’s not going to be a real wedding. It’s not legal in the UK after all." Yeah. A real wedding is when some pop star drives into Vegas and swears before God and the Elvis impersonator to stay with some guy until the pills wear off.

It occurred to me the other day that there are probably a lot of people walking around with wedding rings that are invisible, intangible, because that's all their governments will allow. As in the case of some elderly neighbors I once had, some of those rings are the most permanent.

Date: 2012-06-27 09:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
Extra points for you for teaching me vocabulary.
Hahaha! :D That has to be a first.

Thank you sweetie! <3

It occurred to me the other day that there are probably a lot of people walking around with wedding rings that are invisible, intangible, because that's all their governments will allow.
Isn't that the saddest thing?

Date: 2012-06-26 08:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verityburns.livejournal.com
Oh, I'm so glad you went with this for 'grave', thank you, thank you!

Beautiful - I love your interpretation of these characters, your Sherlock's vulnerability is heart rending and John is so utterly perfect for him... *happy sigh*

Date: 2012-06-27 09:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
You're welcome. I really did not want to write the sad and dark things, so I was so happy to see that it also means 'engrave'. *phew*

I love your interpretation of these characters, your Sherlock's vulnerability is heart rending and John is so utterly perfect for him...
Thank you! <3

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