Fic: 221B - You're The Only One I See

[anarion]

Title: You're The Only One I See
Words: 221
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick.





Previous 221b: Hold on


Today's prompt: mirror

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You're The Only One I See

When you don’t see yourself as handsome, they don’t tend to be of great importance.

They weren’t in 221B. Until that day.

John was standing next to the mantelpiece, sorting through some mail, when Sherlock’s voice startled him. It was what John calls his bedroom voice.

He looked over to Sherlock but Sherlock was not looking at him. He was looking over John’s shoulder... Oh. John turned around and met Sherlock’s gaze in the mirror.

Sherlock growled John’s name again and opened his dressing gown to reveal that he hadn't bothered to put on clothes.

Without breaking eye-contact he touched himself, slowly, sensually, until John couldn’t help a soft moan escape his lips. Only then stepped Sherlock closer to John, pressed his naked front against his back and started touching him .

Being the only one Sherlock sees is a heady feeling on its own, but being touched masterfully while these intense eyes never leave yours is truly overwhelming and it took John all of his willpower to not come embarrasingly fast.

Even then it didn’t take long for him to shudder and groan and spill all over Sherlock’s skilled fingers.

Things progressed in the bedroom afterwards, but they never looked at the mirror the same way.

Also, if desire could make things lose their eyesight, the mirror would be blind.






Next 221b: An Evening Out


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AN:
Today's prompt was 'mirror', given by guest-prompter mirith. Thank you!

And I think we all now the scene it was inspired by. Right?



Title is from the Jay Brannan song "Beautifully", the lyrics say 'When I look in the mirror, you're the only one I see'.


It's hanbunnotsuki's birthday today. Happy Birthday! :)


I will be without internet on Friday and Saturday, therefore you will get two 221Bs today (for Thursday and Friday) and two on Sunday (for Saturday and Sunday).










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Comments

[hanbunnotsuki.livejournal.com]

I'm not usually one for mirror kink, but oh how intense this one was. *fans self*
Being able to read three of your fanfics today really made my birthday (which I have to spend mostly alone and revising for exam). It soothed me from my pre-exam panic attack as well. So, thank you very much!

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Ha, I just edited my AN for you. Damn, you were too fast...

Happy Birthday!

[hanbunnotsuki.livejournal.com]

Eeekk! *blushes* Thank you!! :D

[chocolamousse.livejournal.com]

It was what John calls his bedroom voice.
Argh, I want to hear that voice. In the next series. While speaking to John. Actually I want to see the whole scene in the next series. Please.

Sherlock growled John’s name again and opened his dressing gown to reveal that he didn’t bother to put on clothes.
Clothes are boring.

And I think we all now the scene it was inspired by. Right?
RIGHT!!! Raaah, this scene... This look!! This UST!!! As hot as the fic it inspired you. :D

[anarion.livejournal.com]

RIGHT!!! Raaah, this scene... This look!! This UST!!!
Isn't it brilliant? I got goosebumbs (hahaha, I almost wrote gooseBUMS ) when I saw it for the first time!

[verityburns.livejournal.com]

What a lovely way to start the day! I very much enjoyed the story - and then after drooling over the gif for a while I went back and enjoyed it again!

The hot is smoking hot as always, and the words 'Being the only one Sherlock sees is a heady feeling on its own' really caught my attention. Gorgeous!

[anarion.livejournal.com]

and the words 'Being the only one Sherlock sees is a heady feeling on its own' really caught my attention. Gorgeous!

Can you imagine being the recieving part of one of those looks? I think I'd melt. *shivers*

[tracionn.livejournal.com]

Gosh, it's fantastic! Sweet and yet intense, and I'll never look at the scene again without thinking of this drabble of yours, knowing they are thinking of the moment you just described too. Brilliant!!

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Hee, glad I could make that scene even hotter than it was on its own! ;)
Thanks!

[auntiesuze.livejournal.com]

As if that scene wasn't GUH enough on it's own, now I can just see John thinking, "Stop looking at me like that, Sherlock - we don't have time! We have to get to court! We...er...we...um...what was I doing again?" XD

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Hahaha, true! Poor John. Or not. ;)

[atlinmerrick.livejournal.com]

I think by the end of these 365 days you'll have introduced me to many new kinks. Let's see, so far it's:

* Frozen dildo
* Mirror

That's quite enough to be going on with but I know you've only just begun. Now excuse me, I'm mentally going to revisit Sherlock opening his dressing gown to the glorious nakeness underneath. Thank you.

[anarion.livejournal.com]

I live to serve. ;)

Also considering the number of kinks you have given me, I think it's only fair. :D

[tamzette.livejournal.com]

Tee Hee :-)

So I have a teensy weensy issue with this line here:
Sherlock growled John’s name again and opened his dressing gown to reveal that he didn’t bother to put on clothes.

Aside from the fact that it had me tingling in a good way, it also had the grammar nazi in me tingling in the bad way because if I'm not mistaken it should say "hadn't bothered to put on clothes", not "didn't bother".

Sorry I'm like two weeks late in commenting... I've been busy with a new job and am just now going back and reading everything I've missed...

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Hello! First let me congratulate you on the new job! :)

I'm very glad to hear about the good tingling! And sorry about the bad. English is not my first language, so mistakes like that happen sometime. Sorry!
Now that you say it, it sounds right. :)
Thank you!