Fic: Sunday Sights
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Title: Sunday Sights
Words: 1101
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: voyeurism?
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Beta: the wonderful
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Disclaimer: Sadly the characters are not mine and no money is made (that would be sooo cool!).
Summary: This is set in the same verse as Sunday, the story
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Find 'Sunday' here
Sunday sights
Sherlock tries to open the door to 221B with fingers numb from the cold and damns himself for dashing out of the flat without his coat. But there was a lead to follow and he wanted to be back before John woke.
It is Sunday, John’s day off, and since that Sunday a few weeks back Sherlock has been hoping that something similar would happen again. He is not sure what exactly he is hoping for, but he tries to spend every waking minute of John’s free day in the flat.
The last weeks were confusing on many levels. On the one hand there are these feelings he is suddenly aware of, feelings for John, feelings he doesn’t know what to do with.
On the other hand there are bodily reactions he hasn’t had for years: wet dreams and an early morning hard-on. He ignores these, as he is used to ignoring all of his body’s needs like hunger, tiredness and exhaustion. But then again, John forces him to tend to these needs sooner or later.
Because Sherlock needs someone to remind him that sleep helps when he is so tired that he can’t think anymore or that food is the solution for not fainting after climbing up the stairs.
Since John doesn’t know about this special need though, he can’t tell Sherlock what he should do in this case. Maybe Sherlock should tell him, presented as a more general problem of course? John is a doctor, he would help. Maybe he would even be eager to help, who knows? He did yell Sherlock’s name after all.
But then it could’ve just been a one-off and Sherlock is not ready to risk their friendship upon this inconclusive amount of data. So he hopes for a repeat that will give him more data every Sunday.
Now he hopes that he is not too late and John not awake yet.
He finally manages to unlock the front door, walks up the steps to their flat silently and opens the door to the living room without a noise. His eyes scan the room as he enters and what he sees makes him freeze instantly.
He stares. Speechless. His brain refusing to process the sight in front of him.
Can you imagine Sherlock speechless? Well, there is only one person in the whole wide world capable of rendering the great Sherlock Holmes speechless, capable of reining his brilliant brain to a full stop – John Watson.
So here is what he sees: Said John Watson, wearing Sherlock’s coat and apart from that - nothing. Lying dropped across Sherlock’s armchair, eyes closed and one hand on his cock. His very hard cock.

Sherlock slowly, silently, softly walks a few steps closer, until he is standing behind John’s armchair. Watching. Breathing. Who knew that mere breathing could take such an effort?
He is stunned at how beautiful John looks with his face flushed, his breathing elevated and his chest heaving. Of course he has seen most of John’s body without clothing before, but never like this: naked, vulnerable, lost in his own world.
He starts drinking in all the details, the way John’s nipples stand up, the slow movement of his fingers on his cock, the soft fluttering of his eyelids and the occasional appearance of his tongue to wet his lips.
Then John bites his lip, moans softly and his free hand grabs the coat. Sherlock suddenly very, very much wants to touch. He grips the headrest instead and tries to concentrate on what John is doing to pleasure himself.
John, who is now moaning and rocking his hips and occasionally arching his back. At some point while watching Sherlock, who is looking positively flustered by now, has started pressing his groin against the armchair without even noticing.
Sherlock stares as John’s hand moves faster and he is groaning and God this feels good – he suddenly realises that he has pressed his own hand against his erection and he can’t remember doing that.
He pulls his hand away (it takes effort) and is about to grab the armchair again when John softly moans his name. Sherlock’s eyes fall close against his will and when his brain recovers from the short-term overload he sees, with horrified fascination, that his hand is back.
While breathing was an issue a few minutes ago he now seems unable to get enough air into his lungs. Interesting.
John’s hips and his hand move in a steady rhythm and he starts making small ‘Oh’ noises that go straight to Sherlock’s erection. His legs are shaking and when a small spurt of pre-cum leaks from John’s cock, his knees nearly give in.
It takes a while for Sherlock to realise that the needy whimpers come from his own throat. His free hand shoots up and covers his mouth. Luckily John seems not to have heard it.
John is moving his hand frantically now and his moans turn into small sobs. Sherlock bites his lip to stop himself from groaning and moves his own hand faster.
Some far away part of his brain registers the heat coiling in his groin and the tingling in his fingertips and toes (wow, even his toes?) but the main part is busy with ‘Oh God, how can this feel so good? Oh God, oh God, close, I’m so close...’
And then John almost lifts off the armchair and he positively roars Sherlock’s name and Sherlock is falling, falling, falling, hand clinging to the chair to stop himself from crashing to the ground.
When he opens his eyes again, he sees John, lying spent on the armchair, a small puddle of come on his belly, eyes closed, still breathing hard, his cock slowly softening and Sherlock is filled with such a longing that he cannot stop himself from whispering ‘John’ under his own still ragged breath.
John slowly opens his eyes and smiles at him, which confuses Sherlock a lot. Shouldn’t he be angry? Because Sherlock is pretty sure that what he just did is against every etiquette one can think of.
But John is smiling. And then he says, speech still slightly slurred, “So. You like watching.”
Sherlock has to close his eyes for a moment and remember the breathing part in order to not faint this instant. Because this? Too much.
When he opens his eyes again, John has moved. He is standing right in front of Sherlock, completely naked, the coat shed on the armchair, and God, does he look perfect.
His next question knocks Sherlock’s recently recovered composure out again.
“What about touching?”
Next chapter
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AN: I already have ideas for a next part, which features Sherlock trying the same in John's jumper. I am still hoping that Livia paints that as well. You know, for ahm... reference!
Also, Maria? See how low I stooped? I mentioned the toes. *hides in shame*
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Date: 2011-10-10 01:11 pm (UTC)I...what?
Um. Yes.
And, um Livia has painted that picture you're hoping for. I've seen it. She hasn't posted it yet though.
Also *fucking hell* darlin' this was sexy. And unexpected, how it developed. What an excellent last line.
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Date: 2011-10-12 10:05 am (UTC)Re unexpected: well, I think John is the personification of unexpected. Wait until you read the next part. :D
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Date: 2011-10-10 01:25 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-12 10:10 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-10 01:46 pm (UTC)(And you know that almost every one of us love the toes. You give us nice things! ♥)
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Date: 2011-10-12 10:39 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-12 10:40 am (UTC)Thanks!
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Date: 2011-10-10 02:11 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-10 02:24 pm (UTC)Enjoy! :)
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Date: 2011-10-10 02:30 pm (UTC)damn, how Do you Even? I am just completely incoherent, even after a time out for recovery...
right then, back to.. what ever I was doing before.
;)
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Date: 2011-10-12 10:54 am (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2011-10-10 02:30 pm (UTC)*beeeep*
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Date: 2011-10-12 10:54 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-10 03:09 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-12 10:55 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-10 03:20 pm (UTC)And I must apologise, because when you got this back and opened it, there must have been a nasty moment when you saw what a ridiculous number of Beta Notes were stuck on it, before you looked closer and saw that the vast majority said 'Yes!' and 'Oh, go on Sherlock, you know you want to!' etc.
Lovely, lovely stuff. I look forward to the next thrilling installment :D
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Date: 2011-10-10 08:31 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2011-10-10 03:44 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-12 10:56 am (UTC)Glad you liked it!
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Date: 2011-10-10 03:58 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-12 10:57 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-10 03:58 pm (UTC)*adopts a look of self-sacrifice*
And really you were morally compelled to write a sequel because you couldn't leave Sherlock in such trouble (yes, sometimes writing slash is a moral duty).
Well, that's hot, no wonder that brains are melting here and there. And it's funny too :
He is not sure what exactly he is hoping for, but he tries to spend every waking minute of John’s free day in the flat.
I picture Sherlock answering to Lestrade's phone call : "Er, no, sorry, I can't come now, John is awake and I must, er, be here."
I can't help noticing that Sherlock was stroking the armrest in Sunday and now he's gripping the headrest and pressing his groin against the armchair. Well, lucky furniture. :D
But how can you warn about voyeurism ? Naaaaah, that's healthy curiosity and longing to learn, very recommended in fact and most moral.
And aargh, the final line ! I see Verity's cliffhangers are infectious ! :D
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Date: 2011-10-12 11:01 am (UTC)"Er, no, sorry, I can't come now, John is awake and I must, er, be here."
Seriously, that line had me crying with laughter! :D
@lucky furniture: Oh well, what wouldn't I do to be a piece of furniture in 221B in this (or any other) verse... *ahem*
Thank you for this shiny comment! <3
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Date: 2011-10-10 04:12 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-12 11:02 am (UTC)Thanks for the hilarious and sweet comment! :)
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Date: 2011-10-10 04:19 pm (UTC)This is just fabulous; I'm so glad you got that from my picture :D
And yes, there may or may not be in existence an unfinished drawing of Sherlock in the stripy jumper of awesome doing... uh... things...
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Date: 2011-10-10 05:27 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2011-10-10 05:02 pm (UTC)I really loved the idea that while Sherlock typically relies on John to remind him how to take care of basic physical needs, he hasn't told John about this one, so at first, Sherlock has no idea what to do. Well done, Sherlock! You thought of something after all. What a resourceful man you are. ;)
Very hot. I'm starting to really like Sundays...
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Date: 2011-10-12 11:04 am (UTC)Thank you, more Sundays will follow!
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Date: 2011-10-10 05:04 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-10 08:43 pm (UTC)Sorry for the hurt. Not. :P
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Date: 2011-10-10 05:30 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-12 11:06 am (UTC)It will continue for at least one more part. I will never try anything with the dog tags though, because there are already such brilliant fics about this.
But maybe the scarf... Let me think about it. :)
Thank you!
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Date: 2011-10-10 08:29 pm (UTC)ehem. muse is definitely back. *fans self*
but let me express my glee, undoubtedly expected by you, about this part:
toes (wow, even his toes?)
teheeeeeeee. Can I get blamed for that or did someone else force you? ;) Oh wait, you did blame me hahaaaa, just saw the AN :p *claps hands in stupid excitement*
LOVE THIS!!!! hope your back is better. feel free to distract yourself with writing more of this because oh my god just please. more. soon!
*hugs*
oh seriously,
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Date: 2011-10-10 08:35 pm (UTC)Back is not better sadly...
*hugs back*
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Date: 2011-10-10 09:13 pm (UTC)This is scorching. And it felt very much like Sherlock.
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Date: 2011-10-12 11:07 am (UTC)Also: yay for hitting one of your kinks! :)
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Date: 2011-10-11 02:31 am (UTC)Very hot!
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Date: 2011-10-12 11:08 am (UTC)That's all I will say. :D
Thank you!
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Date: 2011-10-11 04:27 am (UTC)*blinks*
*nervously moistens lips in John-Watson-like fashion*
*contemplates the kind of fainting spell a Regency maiden would indulge in upon seeing Lord Byron*
Wow.
*rolls eyes at self, 'cause, yeah, articulate*
Really hot and well done and, uh, effective!
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Date: 2011-10-12 11:10 am (UTC)I am very happy that my fic had such an effect on you. Thanks! :)
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Date: 2011-10-11 04:39 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-12 11:12 am (UTC)B: Um, melted some brains with porn?
:D
Thanks for the lovely comment!
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Date: 2011-10-11 07:34 pm (UTC)Ahem. Yes. Let's just say that this meets with enthusiastic approval on my part and have done with it, mm?
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Date: 2011-10-12 11:13 am (UTC)I am sooo glad that this meets your enthusiastic approval! Thank you!
There will definitely be a next part. I just need to finish the next blowjob chapter first. My life is hard. ;)
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Date: 2011-10-15 10:41 pm (UTC)As much as I enjoyed Sherlock'a reaction in the last one when he was just hearing, seeing him see John was even better. I loved all his small needy whimpers and the involuntary touches to his erection. I love how he couldn't keep his hands away, it was HOT!
I was truly hoping for John to be aware of Sherlock's presence, hoping that he was putting on a damn good show, and when finally he said “So. You like watching”, I wanted to cheer. Did he plan the whole thing? Was he waiting for Sherlock? Did he know what he was doing in the last Sunday story? Was he aware of the effect he was having on Sherlock?
I'm considering holding John hostage until you write more in this verse...
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Date: 2011-10-15 10:50 pm (UTC)Want to know a secret? Apart from trying to finish the 'Homeless' story, Livia and I are working on the follow-up to this. Ssssshhh!
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