Fic: 221B - I hang on with all my might

[anarion]

221B inspired by a conversation with sabrinaphynn. :)


Title: I hang on with all my might
Words: 221B
Rating: PG
Warnings: none
Pairings : Sherlock/John (slash)
Disclaimer: Sadly the characters are not mine and no money is made (that would be sooo cool!).

Summary: Sherlock from yet another new point of view.





The inability to share is one of my greater weaknesses. But can you blame me? I mean, just look at him!

When we first met, I fell for him immediately. And he for me.

We make such a dashing couple. Oh, you should see the way people look at us when we walk the streets together!

I am jealous of everybody who comes close to him.

Sometimes I think I even could be jealous of his scarf or his coat, but that would be ridiculous.

The only one I am not jealous of, is John. Because John sometimes comes to us, when we are together, Sherlock and I, he comes to us and he touches me too. Together we make Sherlock feel such pleasure. How I love to feel him wreathing and moaning beneath me.

I love the way his skin feels against me, I love his smell and the way his soft brown curls brush me when he moves.

Sometimes Sherlock watches us, together, in the mirror. His bright, sharp eyes take in everything, they way I cling to him, move against him, how perfect I make him look.

I fear that I could lose him, so I cling to his pale body desperately, straining over his chest, buttonholes trying to hold on with all their might to the buttons.


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AN: I apologise for the delay of the final 'Homeless' chapter and the next 'Blow-by-Blow' chapter as well. Work is crazy and my brain inactive when I get home. :(




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Comments

Oh, BRILLIANT!

[sabrinaphynn.livejournal.com]

And for the record, the Scarf says hi... she likes hugging you, P. Shirt.
XD

Re: Oh, BRILLIANT!

[anarion.livejournal.com]

WOW, that was fast! :D

Glad you liked it, thanks for the inspiration! <3

Re: Oh, BRILLIANT!

[sabrinaphynn.livejournal.com]

Well, I had no idea what you were going to do... But you are welcome. It really is all you, though. Your comment reminds me though of something that my Brit Lit teacher way back in high school said to me ages ago... That I had a poet's heart. ( not, a poet's brain, though... )
I am glad I sparked something for you!

[ledasdaughter.livejournal.com]

oh hello there new perspective ;)

this is also the truth and exactly what is happening.

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Tee-hee! :D

[verityburns.livejournal.com]

Genius! If ever a shirt deserved a 221B of its very own, the purple shirt of sex is the one. Beautifully done!

[atlinmerrick.livejournal.com]

This is absolutely darling!

(I might suggest you not give it away (who's speaking) in the summary. Let it be a surprise!

[anarion.livejournal.com]

That is a very good idea and I did remove the shirt before posting it to the comm.
Thanks for the tip and the comment. :)

[mrs-tilford.livejournal.com]

Kudos to your story, and adoration for this icon.

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Thanks for both! :D

[animeserena.livejournal.com]

This is very relevant:

[madrona-8.livejournal.com]

This is very very relevant....also the greatest earworm in the history of forever.

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Oh yes, it is! :D

[fanbot.livejournal.com]

Hee!

[anarion.livejournal.com]

:)

[eanor.livejournal.com]

This is so funny! ^^ Great new perspective and new insight. ;-)

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Tee-hee, glad you liked it! :)

[anarion.livejournal.com]

I am sooo glad you teared up! Wow, that sounded wrong...

But I am glad that you said that, because it made me pretty sad too. And most of the other comments said 'funny' or something along the line. And I was wondering if something is wrong with me.

*hands over tissue*

[pony-rocks.livejournal.com]

:D

[anarion.livejournal.com]

:)

[omletlove.livejournal.com]

Aha! This is where the genius hides. I enjoy your 221b’s, but especially this one- serious and silly all at once.

And while I eagerly await the resolution of “Homeless” and the new “Blow by Blow,” I completely sympathize with crazy schedules and inactive brains. I hope things ease up for you, and in the meantime, I’ll just keep compulsively checking your journal :P

[anarion.livejournal.com]

I think I love you. Your comments always make me happy and most of the times you make me laugh too.

Thank you!

[omletlove.livejournal.com]

<3
The feeling is mutual, I assure you. I think you are absolutely lovely and your fics are amazing; they make my heart feel as though it is on a roller coaster, in the best way.

[ellie_hell.livejournal.com]

Brilliant! BRIIIILLIIIIANT!!!

I laughed so hard when I realized whose point of view you had used here! There needs to be more stories about the shirt, its job isn't as easy as it seems. I'm just speechless, this was great, and I won't comment on how amazing you are for putting a whole story in 221 words.

Oh wait. What did I just do?

[zevbaldwin.livejournal.com]

That`s funny!