Fic: The Reluctant Patient (prompt fill)
Aug. 23rd, 2011 08:02 amAnother prompt fill for Make Me A Monday. Enjoy!
Title: The Reluctant Patient
Words: 1418
Rating: PG
Warnings: brief mentioning of a child being mistreated by doctors
Pairings : Sherlock/John (gen or pre-slash if you like)
Beta: this is a prompt fill, so written rather quickly and not beta'd
Disclaimer: Sadly the characters are not mine and no money is made (that would be sooo cool!).
Summary: Fill for this Make Me A Monday prompt: Mycroft informs John that John is now responsible for making sure Sherlock takes medical appointments (checkup/dentist/eye doctor/whatever). The problem is that getting Sherlock to go is like taking a pet to the vet. (You might try and hide the fact from them, but they KNOW and they are NOT PLEASED.)
The first time it happened, John thought nothing of it.
He had made a doctor's appointment for Sherlock for his annual check-up, a duty he took over from Mycroft after some gentle persuasion.
Apparently it had been his job until John came into the picture, a fact that did nothing to help the brothers' already complicated relationship. Therefore Mycroft, whose constant worrying wasn't appreciated anyway, gladly handed the responsibility over to John.
Without ever mentioning that there was a problem, of course. Or the fact that he had to threaten Sherlock with Mummy most of the time.
So John took the little notebook with all the information concerning Sherlock's doctors without much thinking about it. He was a doctor and he lived together with Sherlock after all, which more or less meant that he was taking care of him anyway. So how much trouble could it be?
He had no idea!
~°~
When the time of the annual check up drew near he made a call to the surgery to make an appointment. He was a little confused when the receptionist offered him two alternative dates, but thought that this was probably something Sherlock insisted on should there be a case.
He wrote the date on a post-it and stuck it on Sherlock's door. When he came home that day the post-it was gone, so he was convinced that he had done his duty and forgot about it.
Until the receptionist called and informed him that Sherlock had missed all three dates.
John made three new dates.
~°~
The next evening, Sherlock was lying on the sofa typing away on his laptop, John wandered over from the kitchen with his tea.
"Your surgery called to inform you that you missed your doctor's appointment. Didn't you see my post-it a few weeks back?"
"Hm?"
"Your annual check-up. You missed it. Did you forget?"
A raised eyebrow told him that please, Sherlock did never forget anything.
"Then what happened?"
"Case. Busy."
"Ok, well, anyway, I made you a new appointment. Do you think one of these dates will work?"
He handed Sherlock the piece of paper, who threw a quick look at it and then stuffed it into his pocket with a sort of affirmative hum.
John sat down in his armchair to read the newspaper and forgot about the whole thing again.
Until the receptionist called and informed him that Sherlock had missed all three dates again.
This time John began to wonder and asked her if that happened a lot. She told him that Sherlock usually appeared on the sixth date in a very foul mood.
John started to get the feeling that Mycroft had not told him everything. But he refused to back down or call for advice. He made three new dates.
~°~
He had to wait four days before he could talk to Sherlock, because he was working somewhere in the outskirts of London and never came home. At least not when John was there.
John got a little suspicious and called Lestrade who informed him that the case was over since yesterday and Sherlock had gone home. John grinned to himself. Sherlock was trying to avoid him just to escape his doctor's appointment? This was really getting ridiculous.
~°~
Over the next few weeks the two men played a game that both were very much inclined to win. Of course John had the more difficult part in this, because he had to come up with new ideas all the time.
At first he tried to bribe Sherlock. Then he tried to threaten him, which went particularly bad.
He tried reasoning with him, telling him that he had to stay healthy if he wanted to keep on living the way he did. Sherlock just huffed.
He tried accompanying him, but Sherlock managed to escape him in a crowded tube. He actually sneaked away like a cat in the dark. John was impressed against his will.
Finally he cornered him in the living room one evening.
"Ok, out with it. What is this whole doctor avoidance thing really about?"
"I don't like people touching me."
"Nonsense. I touch you all the time."
Sherlock opened his mouth, closed it again and – blushed!
"Did you just blush?"
"No."
"Yes, you did!" John giggled, but turned sober almost immediately when he saw Sherlock's face.
"Hey, it's nothing to be ashamed of. Happens to the best of us."
"It doesn't happen to me. Usually."
Sherlock looked extremely displeased, so John took pity on him.
"I won't mention it again, if it makes you uncomfortable. I don't understand though. You don't like other people to touch you. My touch you can tolerate. That actually is a compliment to me. Why are you embarrassed about it?"
By now Sherlock was effectively squirming and obviously looking for a way out of this conversation.
"Can we drop the subject if I agree to go to the doctor's appointment?"
"Nice try. No. Because that might be a solution for this appointment, but I don't want to repeat this charade every time you need to see a doctor."
"I don't need a doctor. I have you."
"Sherlock, I am your friend, I can't be your doctor. I am perfectly happy with stitching you up or anything like that, but you need to see another doctor from time to time."
Sherlock just glared at him. John sighed. They would get nowhere like this.
"Come here."
He waved and Sherlock moved slowly until he was standing next to him.
"Sit down." He waited until Sherlock found a comfortable position, and then sat down on the ground as well, until they were sitting back to back.
"What are you doing?" There was impatience in Sherlock's voice, but also uncertainty.
"I learned this in a rehabilitation centre. Sometimes it helps people to talk about things they don't want to talk about, because you don't have to look at the other person. You can find reassurance in physical contact if you want to nevertheless."
Sherlock huffed, but he did not move.
"Explain it to me, please." John said softly.
Sherlock was silent for a long time. Finally John felt a slight movement. Sherlock leaned back until there was the smallest of contact between their two bodies, then he exhaled and started to talk.
What followed was a tale that sounded like a bad novel. Sherlock had always been very slim and pale, so his parents sent him to take a cure at the sea side. The doctors there were amazed by the brilliant little boy and they did a lot of unpleasant and even painful tests on his brain.
They gave him puzzles to solve while making him sit in a tub full of cold water just to see how long it would take for his body to destroy his ability to think. What he remembered most though were the fingers digging into his skin to hold his almost naked body still during those tests.
Since then he hated the feeling of others touching his skin.
While he told John his story he put more and more weight into their contact until he was leaning fully against John's back. After a while they were breathing in perfect synchronisation.
When he finished his story, they sat in silence for a while. John thought that this explained the long-sleeved shirts, the gloves and his overall disgust for bodily reactions.
John carefully extended his hand and put it on the ground, palm up. After what felt like an awful long time Sherlock hesitantly put his hand over John's, just softly pressing their palms together.
"With you it is different. I don't know why, but I don't mind you touching me."
"You know me and you trust me.”
“No. I mean, yes, I do, but it’s not just that. You have been different from the beginning.”
John did not know what to say, so he just slightly pressed Sherlock’s hand.
“I think might have a solution for the problem. Do you think it would help if I came with you? I could explain the situation to the doctor and ensure that there will be as little touch as possible.”
“Why is it so important to you that I go?”
“Because I care about you.”
Silence.
Then, very softly, “You’ll come with me?”
“Yes.”
“Every time?” Softer still.
“Every time. As long as you need me.”
“Thank you.” So softly it was barely audible.
They sat in silence, pressed together from shoulder to hip, until the sun came up.
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AN: This was supposed to be a cracky mini-fill... But apparently my ability to do short is starting to assimilate Verity's. And then Sherlock decided to be difficult again. *sighs*
Please ignore the stupid experiment thing. I just needed a reason for Sherlock's dislike of being touched.
I am not hinting on sexual abuse in any form here!
Thanks and kisses to Verity for the brainstorming and the title!
And to disassembly_rsn for the beta reading!
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Date: 2011-08-23 02:35 pm (UTC)Sadly I don't know any artist here that I could gently nudge until they comply. *haha*
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Date: 2011-08-23 02:38 pm (UTC)Don't worry, Sherlock has John now, everything is fine! :)
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Date: 2011-08-23 02:41 pm (UTC)Thank you for commenting!
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Date: 2011-08-23 01:15 pm (UTC)Your caring!John is wonderful. Trust him to know what to do.
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Date: 2011-08-23 02:44 pm (UTC)Thank you for the comment, I am soo happy that you liked my John. :)
I love him to pieces!
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Date: 2011-08-23 02:45 pm (UTC)You are very welcome! <3
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Date: 2011-08-23 02:56 pm (UTC)The confrontation was great! I particularly loved when John blush; I could practically hear Sherlock's thought process when he opened his mouth, followed by the implied "oh". What they did to Sherlock was awful, thankfully he has John. I love that John asked what was wrong, I love that he figured out something was wrong, and that he just asked instead of trying to fix Sherlock.
I loved how they gradually got closer, I loved the synchronized breathing, loved their hands touching, and I 'aawwed' when Sherlock finally agreed to go when John said he would go to (because it's important, because he cares - aaaawwww).
Once again, great story. You may have guessed it from my overuse of the word, but I LOVED it :-)
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Date: 2011-08-29 05:14 pm (UTC)Stupid LJ!
Thank you for the overuse (if there even is such a thing) of 'love' and I am happy that you loved it! :)
Quick question though: I meant that Sherlock blushed. Is that a typo in your comment or did I write it mistakable?
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Date: 2011-08-29 05:35 pm (UTC)I supposed I had John on the brain when I commented.
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Date: 2011-08-23 03:07 pm (UTC)And, because, yes, I am a pig when it comes to Owie!Sherlock, I really want a sequel, with a horrible doctor and BAMF!Protective!John!!!
Great story; thanks for this!
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Date: 2011-08-29 05:15 pm (UTC)Thanks for the comment! :)
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Date: 2011-08-23 10:10 pm (UTC)*two thumbs up*
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Date: 2011-08-29 05:19 pm (UTC)I am always a little worried when my story decides to go somewhere else entirely than I had originaly planned.
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Date: 2011-08-29 05:19 pm (UTC)Re: The Reluctant Patient
Date: 2011-09-15 07:16 am (UTC)Up until Sherlock began to explain what was wrong, of course, it *was* funny. :)
the brother's already complicated relationship
I think you meant brothers, plural, here; if so, the apostrophe would go after the 's'.
Without ever mentioning that there was a problem, of course. Or the fact that he had to threaten Sherlock with Mummy most of the time.
I'm always up for a little 'I'M TELLING MUMMY!' aspect to brotherly discussion. I wonder what specifically the threat involved, if it turned out to be more than having Mummy guilt-trip Sherlock into it...
convinced that he did his duty
'did' should be 'had done' here.
Understandable, given that he's used to dealing with soldiers rather than people who are rather more free to ignore this sort of thing. At this point, John would be justified in thinking that the main problem would be wrangling Sherlock's odd schedule and keeping him from forgetting unimportant things like a low-priority appointment for maintaining the transport, so to speak.
Sherlock missed should have a 'had' before 'missed'
She told him that Sherlock usually appeared on the sixth date in a very foul mood.
Given that this has been a regular problem with Mycroft, I would have thought he'd proceed to sending a car / making threats before the sixth date. However, since the receptionist only called back after Sherlock missed all three initial dates, it makes sense that Mycroft would hear about this ordinarily only after Sherlock had missed at least three.
Now you've got me thinking how Mycroft ought to have handled this, assuming that he wouldn't handle Sherlock the way John did and try to find out what the underlying problem was. (Believable, by the way, since that's a matter of how one wants to deal with the relationship between the brothers.) One would think that Mycroft would at least want to avoid having to waste his own time in dealing with making check-up appointments multiple times.
It just seems that Mycroft would have at some point come up with a slightly more effective system over time than one that involves *him* having to deal with the surgery more than once per check-up, even if it involved having his people catch and release Sherlock via black car every time. (Yes, massive misuse of government resources there.) It could still be very tedious for Mycroft and his people, I have no doubt...
Sorry - it just seemed like an interesting problem you've given Mycroft here, and even if he weren't close enough to Sherlock to find out about Sherlock's underlying problem, he *would* care about avoiding the disruption of his own schedule, I think.
Mycroft did not tell him everything
This statement is probably God's truth about almost any given subject that Mycroft might or might not talk about...
Incidentally, here 'did not tell' should be 'had not told'.
I'd've liked to see more of the game between John and Sherlock over those few weeks, but I suppose it would have thrown the piece out of balance and made it more funny than was appropriate, given Sherlock's issues. Still, I would have liked to have seen more of that. :)
Sherlock, I am your friend, I can't be your doctor.
Good for you for making use of this point. It *would* be an issue in real life, I think.
Ah, well. Apologies for the somewhat lumpy review above...
Re: The Reluctant Patient
Date: 2011-09-22 09:21 am (UTC)Thank you for taking sooo much time to leave such a long comment full of amazing concrit! And doing the beta at the same time!
Unfortunately English is not my first language and while I have a beta for all my long fics, I try to deliver prompt fills as fast as possible. That means they get posted without being beta'd. I try my best, but as you could see, I miss important things. Thank you, again!
As for the Mycroft problem: You are -of course- right. I just needed him to hand over the whole thing to John and I never thought about his perspective in this. My bad.
Let me thank you again for the amazing (and not lumpy at all) review! :)
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Date: 2011-10-26 02:51 am (UTC)Of course. This is lovely.
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