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Title: Wounds
Words: surprisingly enough 221
Pairings : Sherlock/John

Disclaimer: Sadly the characters are not mine and no money is made (that would be sooo cool!).

Summary: Sometimes Sherlock comes home wounded.




‘Bloody hell, what happened to you?’

John drops his book onto the armchair he just left and walks over to Sherlock who looks as if he recently had an encounter with a steamroller.

‘Chased a suspect. Got into a fight, fell down a ladder into the sewer. Caught the suspect.’

‘I can see the first and smell the second. Congratulations on the third one.’ They exchange a tender smile. ‘Come on, let’s get you cleaned up.’

Sherlock quietly follows John to the bathroom and lets himself get undressed by John’s careful hands. He steps into the shower, sits down on the ground and waits for John to gently wash away the dirt.

John takes a clean and patched up Sherlock to his bed and marvels at the quietness that surrounds them. These are rare occasions, when Sherlock is exhausted from working but happy because he solved a case. The adrenaline already worn off and not yet bored.

Sherlock wraps himself around John and presses a kiss over John’s heart, before resting his head there. He is completely relaxed and John knows that his brain is mercifully silent right now.

‘I missed you.’ Sherlock intertwines their fingers. John smiles.

‘I love you. All the time. But I think I love you especially when you come home to me beaten up and bruised.’




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Date: 2011-08-09 12:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verityburns.livejournal.com
Aww, such sweetness in their relationship here - I'm not sure how you've managed that in so few words... bravo!

Date: 2011-08-10 12:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
I rule the kingdom of few words! :D

Thank you!

Date: 2011-08-09 12:39 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-08-10 12:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
Best comment ever! Thank you! <3

Date: 2011-08-09 07:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arianedevere.livejournal.com
D'aww, this is so adorable! How can a whumped Sherlock be so cute?

Date: 2011-08-10 12:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
Thanks! :)

Isn't he always?

Also: OMG, your icon! *lol*

Date: 2011-08-10 07:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] atlinmerrick.livejournal.com
Oh! Hurt/comfort! Compliant Sherlock!

"‘I can see the first and smell the second. Congratulations on the third one.’" That made me laugh.

And, um, you might want to change the 'of' here to 'off':The adrenaline already worn of and not yet bored.

Date: 2011-08-10 11:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
Hehe, yes, I might. And I did. Thank you!

Also for the comment! :D

Date: 2011-08-10 01:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ellie_hell.livejournal.com
Is there a limit to the number of times you can make me say 'aaaaw' in a day? Apparently not.

This is sweet and I love when the boys take care of each other. They seem so affectionate and fond of each other, it made me want to bury myself under a blanket and read fluff all day. You wrote the quiet atmosphere really well :-)

Two sentences are battling to be my favourite and I've decided they both can be. The first one is Sherlock's I missed you because I believe that, in canon, soon he'll enjoy going on cases with John so much that the cases without him won't seem as exciting.

The other phrase I loved (and I loved it because it made me laugh so much) is this one: I can see the first and smell the second. Congratulations on the third one. That was pure brilliance!

Date: 2011-08-10 02:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
LOL - no limit in my journal, feel free to go 'aaaww' as often as you like!

Ha! I made you laugh again. *yay*

As always your comments make me feel all warm and fuzzy!

And if you are going to stay under that blanket for a while, I am writing a fluffy one-shot at the moment. It is not very compliant, but I am confident that I will wrestle my muse to the ground sooner or later. ;)

Date: 2011-08-10 02:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ellie_hell.livejournal.com
Oh, trust me, I'm not moving away from that blanket anytime soon. It's cozy here.

A fluffy one-shot sounds fantastic! I hope your Sherlock will be more cooperative than mine and won't insist on taking off John's clothes (unless you want him to do that). I'll just stand in the corner in my cheerleader outfit and I'll be rooting for you to tackle that muse.

GO ANARION GO!

Date: 2011-08-10 03:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
There will be no taking off anybody's clothes! I hope! ;)
Lets leave that for the bj.

No, the problem is that the fic was supposed to be fluff. Really, tooth-achingly sweet fluff. And at the moment I don't feel fluffy.
So there came a case. And insecure!Sherlock. And a fight.
Jeez...

*looks over to the very enthusiastic cheerleader in the corner*

Pst, could you stop waving your pompoms for a minute and help me out here?
I need something they could fight over. Any ideas?

Date: 2011-08-10 03:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ellie_hell.livejournal.com
*throws pompoms away*

*puts on fight consultant hat*

Do you want it to be a big fight? Who starts it? Who's mad at whom first?

Date: 2011-08-10 03:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
Oh yes, BIG fight! First fight as a couple too!

Hm, who starts it?

All I know is that in the end John is so mad that he almost hits Sherlock and then walks out, leaving Sherlock in a panic that John does not really love him.

So maybe Sherlock does something and John gets really angry? Or maybe it starts off not so bad but then Sherlock just says something really hurtful during the fight?

Date: 2011-08-10 03:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
Wait, I'll just finish the paragraph and send the whole thing to you. Maybe that will help!
Then you can see what happens before.

Date: 2011-08-10 03:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ellie_hell.livejournal.com
Good! Because I've had a couple of fight ideas, but it will most likely help if I have a context :-)

Date: 2011-11-03 06:57 pm (UTC)

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