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Title: Not a housekeeper
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by [livejournal.com profile] atlinmerrick. Day 212.




Previous 221b: Phytology


Today's prompt: independence

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Not a housekeeper


Mrs Hudson heard him open the outer door and called his name before he could set a foot on the stairs.

He took a quick deep breath but followed her into her own flat when she waved him near.

“Mrs Hudson, this better be important. I really don’t have time. I just wanted a quick word with John before meeting DI Lestrade.”

“We need to talk about your brother.”

“Dear God, what has he done now?”

“Nothing as far as I know. It’s just... I watched the two of you on John’s birthday. You are still stuck in your... what did they call it on the telly? Ah, yes, childhood dynamics! It’s not healthy. I know you love each other, although I don't approve of the strange ways you tend to show it.”

“Mrs Hudson.”

“I’m not finished.”

He rolled his eyes inwardly. He should have been more careful to avoid being ambushed by Mrs Hudson.

She was making tea now, her back to him.

“Don’t you roll your eyes at me, young man!”

“I didn’t...”

“But you wanted to. I know it’s difficult for you to let go, but will you at least think about it? It would do both of you good and it is your responsibility to take the first step. You are, after all, the older brother.”





Next 221b: Shaken, not stirred


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AN:
The prompt - courtesy of Verity Burns - was 'independence'.










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Date: 2013-01-06 01:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] obsessionality.livejournal.com
*cackling* love mrs. h! I bet Sherlock will have a grand laugh when he hears about this! xx

Date: 2013-01-06 02:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tamzette.livejournal.com
Brilliant as always :D

I love that moment of uncertainty at whether it's Mycroft or Sherlock. I pretty much figured it was Mycroft once Mrs. H said "we need to talk about your brother". I don't think she'd phrase it quite like that with Sherlock somehow... :)

Date: 2013-01-06 02:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sabrinaphynn.livejournal.com
Oh you clever clever one ;) tee hee.

Date: 2013-01-06 03:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] atlinmerrick.livejournal.com
How can I have read these for this long and still get surprised? Because of course I was totally surprised that it was Mycroft. You are very Moffatian (word? is now) in your trickery. And that is most certainly a compliment!

Date: 2013-01-06 03:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chocolamousse.livejournal.com
I learnt my lesson: every time you use personal pronouns instead of first names, I get suspicious! :D Clever and funny; I like Mycroft rolling his eyes inwardly, le learnt his lesson too!

I think it's "this had better be important." :-)

Date: 2013-01-06 04:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verityburns.livejournal.com
Ooh, clever girl! I bestow upon you my 'special' ringtone... you have earned it. Very well done!

Date: 2013-01-06 07:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arianedevere.livejournal.com
Oy, that's mine! *pouts*

Oh, all right, Anarion deserves it even more. Love the twist in this one!

Date: 2013-01-06 07:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verityburns.livejournal.com
Yes, but it's yours ALL THE TIME... other people get it only on very special occasions :D

Date: 2013-01-06 10:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rox712.livejournal.com
You got me! I didn't even suspect it! *sigh* I will never learn.

Love BAMF!Mrs. Hudson!

Date: 2013-01-06 10:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rox712.livejournal.com
Now I'm curious!

Date: 2013-01-06 10:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rox712.livejournal.com
What does it say about me that I downloaded it without even thinking about it?

Perfect ringtone is perfect!

Date: 2013-01-06 11:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verityburns.livejournal.com
Isn't it, though?!

And I think it says that once a woman has eaten your cookies, she is your slave for life and would never lead you astray - and that you are aware of this fact :D

Date: 2013-01-07 12:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] days-of-storm.livejournal.com
it would have been really funny if you had been rickrolled now :D

Date: 2013-01-07 12:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] days-of-storm.livejournal.com
LOL, at DI Lestrade I knew it was Mycroft...Sherlock wouldn't have spoken that politely...and he doesn't have quick words with John :D yay for Mrs Hudson putting Mycroft in his place!

Date: 2013-01-07 08:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rox712.livejournal.com
*imagine insert GIF of hugging cats*

Date: 2013-01-07 08:23 am (UTC)

Date: 2013-01-07 11:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] auntiesuze.livejournal.com
I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE.

And Mrs. Hudson is totally right, as she always is. *nods*

Date: 2013-01-08 10:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tracionn.livejournal.com
BBWWWAAAHHAA! You totally got me, I didn't see it coming. So well done!

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