Fic: 221B - Black and white

[anarion]

Title: Black and white
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick.






Previous 221b: For oral intake



Today's prompt: earth

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Black and white


John is pretty sure that he is in hell. Not that he’d deserve it. Still.

It’s January the third and he is standing up to his thighs in the freezing water of a lake somewhere in Wales. He is wearing a chest wader, so at least his clothes stay dry, but his fingers and toes are so cold he can’t feel them anymore.

They have been wading the water for hours now, searching for a murder weapon John is pretty sure they’ll never find.

He hates Wales.

***

John is pretty sure he is in heaven. He’d totally deserve that.

It’s still January the third and he is lying in a comfortable bed in an inn next to the lake. There is a fire burning and his fingers and toes are still tingling from the amazing orgasm he just had after Sherlock decided to reward him for this day’s ordeal with a spectacular fuck in front of the fire place.

Maybe Wales isn’t so bad after all.

***

John knows that he is defining his life in extremes. But to be honest, there is not much else you can do when you share yours with Sherlock Holmes.

The one and only Sherlock Holmes, who just now is completely naked, prancing through the room, praising himself and occasionally nibbling on a biscuit.




Next 221b: Unsung hero


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AN:
The prompt - courtesy of Verity Burns - was 'earth'.

Originally I had Sherlock nibble on a baiser. But my dictionary told me you guys call it meringue. *pfff*
Oh and look, another orgasm. Sorry to the guys in the parallel universe. ;)







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Comments

[atlinmerrick.livejournal.com]

I absolutely love the way you told this story. This is perfect.

[chocolamousse.livejournal.com]

I think you drove John completely mad with this orgasm denial thing, even if it doesn't take place in the same story. I mean, he's frozen to death in a Welsh lake and he thinks it's hell; can I remind you of the last time he was sure to be in hell? Let me quote you: Sherlock's cock sliding against his own, Sherlock's fingers creating just the right amount of pressure, Sherlock's left hand squeezing his bum and Sherlock's desperate panting in his ear – John was sure he was in hell. I wonder what he means by hell ultimately. :D

but his fingers and toes are so cold he can’t feel them anymore.
Speaking of your Advent calendar, this is exactly what John needs to do to relieve his sexual frustration: soak his penis in frozen water. He won't feel it anymore. :D

Oh, it's such a shame Sherlock doesn't nibble on a baiser at the end! It's the French word for "kiss" and Sherlock nibbling on a kiss is probably a pretty thing. :-)

Funny and hot, perfect for the beginning of the weekend.

[tracionn.livejournal.com]

Aaaaawwww! It's soooo lovely and I felt deeply with John. Twice.
:D

[aranel-parmadil.livejournal.com]

"The one and only Sherlock Holmes, who just now is completely naked, prancing through the room, praising himself and occasionally nibbling on a biscuit."

I'm staring at my laptop screen, visions of naked, biscuit-wielding Sherlock dancing across my brain.

I think I'm going straight to hell.

[verityburns.livejournal.com]

*giggles*

[verityburns.livejournal.com]

OK, I have a new favourite!

This is bloody brilliant! Structure, content, wit and 'phwoar!' level... absolutely bang on. You just get better and better, my dear - and watching you do it is an utter delight :D

[rox712.livejournal.com]

I think I have never had a favourite till now. I couldn't decide. This one though is simple perfection. Wow!