John bit his lip and pushed his groin forward The word "groin" always sounds a little weird to me because in French it only means "snout of a pig", which kills the mood a tiny bit. But also, which is much more lovelier...
he realised that he just noticed that the man did not wash his hands Always the doctor! :D
“Hurry up, if we have to stop one more time I'm going to die.” *checks there is no "major character death" warning* Good.
he only managed to say, “Holy...” before the bathroom door opened again. I think you mean "holly", with Christmas coming (hey, I said "coming"!) and everything. :D Also, is it Mycroft?
*reads the AN* Whatever upset you yesterday, I hope you feel better now. *hugs you*
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Date: 2012-12-08 05:08 pm (UTC)The word "groin" always sounds a little weird to me because in French it only means "snout of a pig", which kills the mood a tiny bit. But also, which is much more lovelier...
he realised that he just noticed that the man did not wash his hands
Always the doctor! :D
“Hurry up, if we have to stop one more time I'm going to die.”
*checks there is no "major character death" warning*
Good.
he only managed to say, “Holy...” before the bathroom door opened again.
I think you mean "holly", with Christmas coming (hey, I said "coming"!) and everything. :D Also, is it Mycroft?
*reads the AN*
Whatever upset you yesterday, I hope you feel better now. *hugs you*
The British spelling is rather "revelled". :-)