Fic: 221B - Good intentions
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anarionTitle: Good intentions
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: talking about a deadly disease (no one has it though)
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by
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atlinmerrick.Previous 221b: Taken (2/6)
Today's prompt: liar/ lie
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Good intentions
“You lied to me.”
“And that surprises you?”
He could see the pain, caused by his actions, before he received his answer.
“No. But that still doesn’t justify it. This concerns both of us. You can’t make decisions like that alone.”
“Welcome to my world.”
“John. This is not funny.”
“I'm not laughing. I didn't do this to hurt you or to show you what it feels like to be on the other side. I just... I didn't want you to worry.”
“So you decided to keep the fact that your doctor thought you might have a malignant tumour from me.”
“I would have told you if he had found something. You weren't even supposed to know about the check-up, since he didn't. I wanted to spare you the...”
“Stop. Just stop.”
John stopped.
Sherlock dropped down on the sofa as if he suddenly forgot how to stand. John wanted to shout that Sherlock would have done the same, because he would have, but suddenly it didn’t matter anymore. He knelt in front of Sherlock and gently rested his hand on Sherlock’s.
“I should’ve told you. I’m sorry.”
Sherlock gave a short nod, got up and left, shutting the door behind him. And although he had done it with the best intentions, John realised that this time he had been the bastard.
Next 221b: Desires are nourished by delays
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AN:
Today's prompt was 'liar/ lie'.
I apologise for the hurt after yesterday's angst. Tomorrow will be UST. In case that's better. *lol*
I have good and bad news. The good: 'Taken' has now 6 chapters. The bad: It's two more chapters of angst. You can thank Verity Burns and Chocolamousse for that. :D
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Date: 2012-10-05 05:32 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-10-05 05:43 pm (UTC)Ah, good, a little bit of rest after yesterday's nail-biting, I won't be angsting at the end at least.
*reads the fic*
Oops.
I understand Sherlock so well and I understand John so well too. You want to protect the ones you love but in the end you hurt them all the same, and maybe in a worse way. So, er, do you plan to write a sequel, you know, a fluffy one, or will it be kind of This Time No (Forgiveness)? ;-)
*reads the AN*
I don't even know what you're talking about.
*desperately tries to delete her yesterday's comments. Fails*
Er, can I say that Verity made me? (It's a lie but it works sometimes.) But, listen, as John I had only good intentions! I did it to, er...
*gives up*
Oh crumpets.
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Date: 2012-10-05 06:05 pm (UTC)*puts on cutest kid voice*
Thank you Anarion for the lovely angst bunny bites. (*whispers- Do it again!*)
-Ahem-
*puts on cutest kid voice again*
Thank you Santa, Verity, and Chocolamousse, for extending the torture and making us get more delicious bits of a story from Anarion.
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Date: 2012-10-05 06:48 pm (UTC)And, by the way - ouch.
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Date: 2012-10-05 06:52 pm (UTC)They will work it out, yes? Yes? Please say they will. Please please?!
And no, UST is not better! *sobs*
But you know we will read it, you made us addicts and I don't regret a thing :)
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Date: 2012-10-08 09:10 am (UTC)