Suddenly all the female employees (and Anderson) Like Rox712 I wonder if Anderson is slighly gay in your verse... or if he's just very inquisitive! Anyway, I'd be pressed against the window too if Greg was dismounting his motorcycle in leather trousers in my yard. Oh yes.
“It’s Greg,” John says gobsmacked when the man takes off his helmet. “Obviously.” I love these two lines, they're so IC. John who expresses his surprise candidly, even if he's stating the obvious, and Sherlock who'd rather die than admit that he's (maybe) gobsmacked too.
And there's a happy ending, with the "sex on the horizon " tag and the comeback of the "inconvenient boner" one! Even if I'm not sure that John will say it's inconvenient! :D Anyway, I'd have a gleam in my eyes too if I had spent fifteen minutes wrappped around John on a motorcycle. Oh yes. Or if I had spent fifteen minutes with Sherlock wrapped around me on a motorcycle. Oooooh yes.
I'm nitpicking, but "license" is an Americanism, the English say, I mean write, "licence". But maybe it's just Greg going all Easy Rider! :D
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Date: 2012-09-03 08:32 pm (UTC)Like Rox712 I wonder if Anderson is slighly gay in your verse... or if he's just very inquisitive! Anyway, I'd be pressed against the window too if Greg was dismounting his motorcycle in leather trousers in my yard. Oh yes.
“It’s Greg,” John says gobsmacked when the man takes off his helmet.
“Obviously.”
I love these two lines, they're so IC. John who expresses his surprise candidly, even if he's stating the obvious, and Sherlock who'd rather die than admit that he's (maybe) gobsmacked too.
And there's a happy ending, with the "sex on the horizon " tag and the comeback of the "inconvenient boner" one! Even if I'm not sure that John will say it's inconvenient! :D
Anyway, I'd have a gleam in my eyes too if I had spent fifteen minutes wrappped around John on a motorcycle. Oh yes. Or if I had spent fifteen minutes with Sherlock wrapped around me on a motorcycle. Oooooh yes.I'm nitpicking, but "license" is an Americanism, the English say, I mean write, "licence". But maybe it's just Greg going all Easy Rider! :D