Fic: 221B - A different kind of virginity

[anarion]

Title: A different kind of virginity
Words: a 221B has 221 words and ends with a b-word
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick.






Previous 221b: Show and tell (1/?)


Today's prompt: touch

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A different kind of virginity


Touch was the only one of Sherlock’s senses that was only partially developed.
John discovered this in the dawn of their relationship when everything was still new and unknown.

While Sherlock knew how to differentiate several soils samples with his fingertips and what to feel for on a corpse, he had no idea what to do when it came to a living body.

“Tell me how you like to be touched,” John whispered to Sherlock one of the first nights they spent together.

“Pinch my nipples, medium pressure, then start stroking my cock from the base to the tip, light at first and apply more pressure after 3 minutes. Then...”

“I wasn’t asking for a manual to get you off as quickly and efficiently as possible. Though that might be handy too. I want to know what turns you on, what makes you shiver and what makes you cry my name and cling to me desperately.”

“I don't understand.”

John realised that he really didn’t. So he showed him. He ghosted fingertips and lips over skin until Sherlock shivered and he licked and sucked until he cried out.

Night after night he taught Sherlock what he liked and how to discover it and when he had learned all he could about himself, Sherlock went and tested his new knowledge on John’s body.




Next 221b: What friends are for


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AN:
Today's prompt was 'touch'.







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Comments

[atlinmerrick.livejournal.com]

THIS IS FUCKING BRILLIANT.

As soon as I started reading I wanted to steal this idea, because it's wonderful. Of course Sherlock wouldn't know how to....elegantly touch and be touched, how to relish it, give it, get it. Wow. I love this story and maybe, just maybe, if you're looking for a 1,000 word fic prompt here it is?

[chocolamousse.livejournal.com]

While Sherlock knew how to differentiate several soils samples with his fingertips and what to feel for on a corpse, he had no idea what to do when it came to a living body.
Very credible and very sad.

“Pinch my nipples, medium pressure, then start stroking my cock from the base to the tip, light at first and apply more pressure after 3 minutes. Then...”
Romanticism and sensuality, your name is Sherlock. :D

Night after night he taught Sherlock what he liked and how to discover it and when he had learned all he could about himself, Sherlock went and tested his new knowledge on John’s body.
Aww. But he's a scientist after all. He knows that theory is nothing without experimentation.

looks at you current mood
*throws you chocolate*

Very believable and lovely. I like that! I'm not sure but isn't it "the only one of Sherlock’s senses" rather than "the one only of Sherlock’s senses"?

[purrculier1.livejournal.com]

"I don't Understand."
Heart. Broken. Itty-bitty pieces all over the floor.(in just three words, Stop being so goshdarn brilliant, darn you woman!)

Poor Sherlock, only understood the practical, the clinical, this action causes that reaction, body will do this.(no. joy.)

And then there was John.purrrr.

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Well, we already share a brain, so feel free to take any idea you like. :)

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Damn it. I read that sentence at least ten times... *headdesk*
Thank you! <3

[rox712.livejournal.com]

I love the idea that John teaches Sherlock everything in the one field he knows nothing about, and Sherlock gets to use his newly acquired knowledge on John. *sighs happily*

(and don't think I have abandoned you. I just had a week from hell)

[fanbot.livejournal.com]

Lovely.

[anarion.livejournal.com]

I am so sorry to hear that you had a bad week. Hope all is better now! *hugs*