Fic: 221B - Castle in the Clouds

[anarion]

Title: Castle in the Clouds
Words: 221
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by atlinmerrick.





Previous 221b: A bitter pill to swallow


Today's prompt: castle/ castle ruins

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Castle in the Clouds


“I wanted to be a knight when I was young.”

“Why?”

“Because I wanted to be a hero and fight dragons and save a princess.”

“A princess.”

“Never mind...”

How this conversation (that John had completely forgotten about) let to Sherlock taking a case involving a renaissance fair and then to Sherlock going down on him in a murky corner of the castle ruins will probably be a mystery forever.

Not that John was in any state to ask questions or complain. He was desperately trying to keep upright by clutching at Sherlock’s shoulders and at the same time trying to silence himself by biting his lip.

It had been a while.

So when Sherlock suddenly pulled off, John opened his mouth to suck in a huge gulp of air to... he didn’t really know. Scream in frustration? Curse? Beg? Sob?

But before he could do anything, Sherlock softly moaned his name and looked up at him.

“John. What do you want? Tell me.”

“I want ... finish me with your mouth. Please. Now. Then I want to go back... and I want you to fuck me. Drag it out. Make it last.“

Sherlock growled and both men knew that he would make it last for a long time until they were trembling with want. He would make them both beg.






Next 221b: A job to die for


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AN:
Today's prompt was 'castle/ castle ruins'.









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Comments

[teejod.livejournal.com]

Phew! Is this hot or is it just me having a fever?!

Well, John, princesses come in many shapes ;)

[tamzette.livejournal.com]

My aunt's waiting for me downstairs to take me out for supper but I had to read this before we went and boy am I glad I did!

Hot, hot, hot!!!!

[tracionn.livejournal.com]

hnfg. That was...good. Very. And hot, god yes. Loved how Sherlock asked John and how they both knew how it would be like once they're home. Yes, very hhnnfg :)

[chocolamousse.livejournal.com]

*reads the title and the prompt*
Oh, it's lovely, it's going to be something poetic and romantic.
*reads the fic*
Or not.

“Because I wanted to be a hero and fight dragons and save a princess."
And he's a hero and fights the villains and saved Sherlock. Even better! Also, why can't I help thinking of Smaug? :D

It had been a while.
Why? What happened? You must tell us!

John opened his mouth to suck
Interesting fact: Sherlock has just done the opposite.

How this prompt let to you writing such a burning hot 221B will probably be a mystery forever. Not that I'm complaining. Oh no. You amazingly redeem yourself after the regrettable omission of the "helping John" part in yesterday's fic. :D

[chocolamousse.livejournal.com]

P.S. I want the sequel! *is not demanding at all*

[teejod.livejournal.com]

There has to be a sequel! The prompt was 'castle/castle ruins' - as far as I can read, only 'castle ruins' has made it into the text itself (titles don't count, do they?).

[ledasdaughter.livejournal.com]

haha, oh look, porn, porn and little else :D

[obsessionality.livejournal.com]

Hnng my belly went flop so quickly! unf!

[rox712.livejournal.com]

Sorry to intrude, but you have my points, so I'll simply join you. Why has it been a while and how is anarion able to make such a prompt into something so hot? (And I totaly see Smaug here!)

[verityburns.livejournal.com]

The whole thing is super hot, but the last sentence just about finished me off... phew! That is a lovely concept right there.

*adds to the demands for a sequel*

[purrculier1.livejournal.com]

Will join in the pointing out of prompt is only half filled.
Only castle ruins are mentioned.
Meaning castle part is implied (proof--->)"I want to go back...?)"(Home){there, filled in missing word} "Drag it out." "Make it last."

Quote to support position "A Man's home is his Castle".Sooo ergo, Part. Is. Missing.(yes this is just shameless begging)

I'll just go stick my head in the freezer{'cause prickleburrs that was just *purrrrr*), Thank You and wait for rebuttle.

[anarion.livejournal.com]

*hands over a bucket with ice cubes*

Thank you for the comment and for making me laugh with the pricess remark! :D

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Hahaha, I hope you didn't look flustered when you went down. ;)

Thank you!

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Thank you for this cupcake of a comment! <3

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Oh, it's lovely, it's going to be something poetic and romantic.
*reads the fic*
Or not.
Never expect the obvioius! :D

How this prompt let to you writing such a burning hot 221B will probably be a mystery forever. Not that I'm complaining. Oh no. You amazingly redeem yourself after the regrettable omission of the "helping John" part in yesterday's fic. :D
I love you. *smooches*

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Isn't it beautiful? ;D

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Oh, isn't this a nice thing to hear! Thank you! :D

[ledasdaughter.livejournal.com]

it iiiiiiiis!

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Please contact my prompter (is that a word?), Mrs Merrick, for complaints and demands.

Apart from this, I'm pretty sure Sherlock is the only person on earth who could make himself beg. *imagines the scene*
Wow. Um, I hope Atlin wants a sequel of this as well. *ahem*

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Yay, head in the freezer! :D

Thank you!

[anarion.livejournal.com]

Please contact my prompter (is that a word?), Mrs Merrick, for complaints and demands.