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Title: Buried Alive
Words: 221
Rating: PG-13
Pairings : Sherlock/John
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: ‘365 days of 221Bs’ challenge: a prompt a day, given by [livejournal.com profile] atlinmerrick.





Previous 221b: At the Break of Dawn


Today's prompt:

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Buried Alive


He was lying flat on his stomach.

“Stop moving.”

John was only half-conscious but Sherlock’s voice – somewhat muffled – came from somewhere next to his left ear. He opened one eye and could see exactly nothing. He didn’t bother to open the other one.

He couldn’t feel his left arm, so he tried shifting his weight and turn around. Something was pressing down on him.

“I said ‘Stop moving.’” Sherlock’s voice was clearer now.

John grumbled and tried moving again. Sherlock’s hand slid over his shoulder and pressed him back down.

“Are you listening?”

“Not really. I can’t feel my left arm.”

“I can. It’s pressed into my stomach.”

“I need to move it to get the blood flowing again.”

“Not a priority right now.”

“Yeah, Sherlock, it kind of is. Let me turn around.”

“No.”

“This is ridiculous. What are you? Five?”

“I’m comfortable.”

“Isn’t that nice...”

“You always chide me for not sleeping enough. Now that I am you’re not content either.”

“You’re not sleeping. You’re talking to me.”

“Irrelevant.”

“Sherlock. I promise you can lie down on me again in a minute. Please let me move.”

“If you insist.”

“I do.”

“Fine.”

The weight disappeared and John turned around. A second later, Sherlock’s head resting on his shoulder again, John’s feet suddenly went cold.

“And stop stealing my blanket!”








Next 221b: Caring Is Not an Advantage


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AN:
Today's prompt was 'pillow'.

You might have noticed that I removed the b-word spoiler for this one again. Were you worried in the beginning? *evil grin*
Anyway, that made me wonder. Do you read it before reading the 221B? Always? Sometimes? Depending on what?
TELL ME! :D













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Date: 2012-06-03 05:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tracionn.livejournal.com
A.DORABLE. Very very much.
<3

Date: 2012-06-03 05:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chocolamousse.livejournal.com
You... You can't do that. First this title, then this "lying flat on his stomach / 'Stop moving.' / only half-conscious / opened one eye and could see exactly nothing / couldn’t feel his left arm / get the blood flowing again” thing. Oh my God it's the swimming pool before series two again. Then: “This is ridiculous. What are you? Five?” “I’m comfortable.” Oh, you! :D Very clever and funny. Your imperious-and-not-childish-at-all Sherlock is adorable and pillow!John is... *daydreams a bit* Well, I think I can understand Sherlock. :D

Were you worried in the beginning? *evil grin*
Ha ha! Oh, come on, no, absolutely not, you can't fool me like that. *looks away awkwardly*

Do you read it before reading the 221B?
Always! Because ANTICIPATION TIME! But I also love it when you surprise us as you do today. So... It's all fine! :-)

*sees your current mood*
*hugs you*

Date: 2012-06-03 08:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rox712.livejournal.com
First of all: your not alone. We're all just a small internet step away. Creepy, isn't it :-D

Second: Aaaaaawwww!

Date: 2012-06-03 09:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arianedevere.livejournal.com
Oh, you evil wench. But that last line is so adorable!

If the prompt is clear at the beginning, I'll read it, but if it's blanked out or left until the end, no, I never read it. I like to be surprised.

Date: 2012-06-04 05:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hanbunnotsuki.livejournal.com
Oh you scared me there with the title. But aaww it turned out to be so adorable. Hee they're just too cute when half conscious.

As for the prompt, I usually read it after the 221B. I love being surprised and left guessing till the end :D

Date: 2012-06-04 05:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
You... You can't do that.
Apparently I can. :P

Ha ha! Oh, come on, no, absolutely not, you can't fool me like that. *looks away awkwardly*
Tee-hee. I love you! <3

*hugs back*

Date: 2012-06-04 05:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
Creepy in some cases. Not in this. *hugs*

Date: 2012-06-04 06:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
Oh, you evil wench.
I heard it's a good thing when people start to curse you. :D
So thank you! *beams*

Date: 2012-06-04 06:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
I would like to say that I'm sorry for scaring you, but since that was kinda the point, I'd be lying. *evil grin*

:D

Date: 2012-06-04 06:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D

Date: 2012-06-04 08:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] treelight.livejournal.com
I was VERY worried when I read the title and even more at the lack of the prompt in the beginning. I usually read it in that order - well and then the story ;)

Date: 2012-06-05 12:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verityburns.livejournal.com
Oh, you got me! I was really worried until “Yeah, Sherlock, it kind of is. Let me turn around.” Well done, you!

I do usually read the prompt in advance, just because I like to guess at what you'll do with it... I'm not telling you my success rate, but it's not great!

Date: 2012-06-06 05:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
But I made it all better in the end, right? :D

Am so glad to hear that you still read the story after reading my stupid attempts at titles. ;)

Date: 2012-06-06 05:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
Oh, you got me! I was really worried
HA! Maybe I should try a cliffhanger next? :D

Date: 2012-06-30 04:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dark-oracle-ran.livejournal.com
Oh this was just adorable and so funny. :) I can totally imagine them being like that. Awsome!

Date: 2012-07-02 09:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anarion.livejournal.com
Whee, thank you so much!

Also, great icon! :D

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