Date: 2012-05-30 06:13 pm (UTC)
Sherlock wants him to come to bed.
I think you can dispense with to bed. :D

it had to be a Sunday.
Which is SO promising in fics you write!

he let his thoughts wander back to last night.
Go on, Sherlock. Let them wander as much as they want and please feel free to share them with us. Please.

Had John looked at him in this second he would’ve known that he was in trouble
Oh, I wouldn't say that. I mean, trouble is not the world I would use if I were in John's position. And when I say position...

Sherlock pretended not to notice.
None so blind as those that will not see. *nods wisely*

something else starting with ‘a’ and rhyming with 'spousal'.
'Carousal'? Is it something to do with Harry's alcoholism? *flutters her eyelashes with an innocent look*

Sherlock dropped the phone out of reach, pulled off the towel and put his mouth to much better use than talking.
Oh, John had already made the breakfast, then.

Well this small glimpse into the future of our boys was hot, and funny, and I don't know how you manage to write so much in so little time. I'm in awe! Also, yay for the Sunday series' comeback! :D

Er, don't you mean decent erection instead of descent erection? It would be a better omen for the erection! :D
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